The tunnel is to dark what's the point of this if I can't see. Ouch! See all I ever do is bump into a wall. Jackie then sees a bright light. Oh yes freedom. Jackie climbs out and sees the figure. "I warned you!" RUNNING! I'm running for my life. Jackie trips. OWW! The figure picks up a knife. "You know what how about you see this guess who I found in the street." The kidnapper drags her into the room where her mum is. "Mum!!!" He stabs her to death. Blood. Fresh blood.
That's it! Jackie snatches the knife of the kidnapper. BLOOD. Just BLOOD. I scream in fear hoping I will be forgiven. A police siren rings. No it can't be. Escaping is the last thing I do. I'll rather just surrender (if I don't want to get in more trouble).
"get down!"
I kneel down hands in the air the last thing I ever saw was the blood of my mother.
A/N: well that's the end of this book to read on with what happened I'm going to write another book called prison life but first please comment if it is good or not!!!
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kidnapped
Mystery / ThrillerA young teen named Jackie had long brown hair, brown eyes. she lost her friend Jane and is in depression. she had a normal life until she was threatened would she escape or would it be the end of Jackie.
