Story Time (Divergent)

Chapter 5- Tobias' Turn

Ok, well I don't know whether or not that last chapter was good, or whether or not you liked it. That's why I ask all those, if possible, to review. Even though I'm kind of re-writing Divergent for the story, I welcome any ideas that anyone might want me to add. That is, after this chapter

* I do not own Divergent

Chapter 5 - Tobias' Turn

Tobias' POV

"Mommy, can daddy finish telling the story?" But not tired enough to give the story a break.

Tris and I look at each other sharing a knowing look. A few seconds later, she nods for me to continue with the story.

"Ok," I being. I pick the kids up and lie them back down on our bed. Tris on one side, me on the other, and Jenna and Jake in the middle. Once we are all tucked in, I turn off the main light and turn on the bed side lamp.

"After I met mommy for the first time, helping her off the net after she jumped down the hole, I later met who is now Aunt Christina. She was a transfer just like your mommy. Who had a big scary instructor to teach her what she knows now." I smile and look up at Tris as I say that last part. She, too, is smiling. I stretch my arm across the kids, who are starting to fall asleep, to move a strand of Tris' pink and green streaked, blonde hair out her face. The takes my had and kisses it.

Taking my hand away, I do the same to Jennas hair, and ruffle Jakes hair around a little. They giggle, which makes both me and Tris laugh. Their laughs are so cute.

"I took them for a tour around the pit. You know where that is right?" I ask them. I receive to simultaneous yeses from the middle of the bed.

"Well afterwards, I brought them to dinner, where we soon met up with Uncle Zeke, Aunt Shauna, Uncle Will, and Uncle Uriah, who was also an initiate, but already from Dauntless-"

"Uncle Uriah is from Dauntless just like us?" Jake asked.

"Yes, as I was saying. Daddy knew that your uncles and aunts would take care of mommy. To make sure she didn't do anything that would cause her to get hurt." I eyed Tris. She knows exactly what I mean.

The kids are closing their eyes as Tris sticks her tongue out at me with her eyes also closed. She smiles at me as she opens them. Looking down, she says, "Looks like they couldn't stay awake past 10:30. I knew they weren't able to. She smiles at them while fixing Jakes hair that I messed up.

"Let's take them to bed. We can finish the story tomorrow night when we are BOTH home." Tris says to me, emphasizing 'both'.

"Ok." I agree and we each take a child and bring them to their rooms. After that, we return to our room, and finally get to rest for the night.

"Good night, mommy." I say to Tris as she gets comfortable. She turns around and says. "Night, daddy." We both laugh for a little while. Soon it's time to call it a night. Until story time is continued tomorrow night.

I thought I'd try and mention a few of the other characters. What do you think? Like it? Hate it?(which I hope you don't)

It's shorter than the last few chapters so far, and I'm sorry. But like I said before, I am always welcome to any ides that any of you might have to make this story funnier or better.

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