THIS CHAPPIE IS UMM OKAY I'M NOT SURE ABOUT IT THOUGH SO PLEASEE COMMENT AND VOTE CAUSE I NEED YOUR OPINIONS ABOUT IT CAUSE IF IT'S NOT OKAY I'LL PULL THE PLUG ON IT.. ;( PLEASE VOTE AND COMMENT oh and also gone through ad edited last chap relised i kept saying thirteen.
“Umm hi Lola isn’t it” you can count on me to look like an total oaf in front of a cute guy I didn’t know what to say “u-u-umm yes it is well Talola actually but Lola for short w- what are you doing here” I just had to ask didn’t “ I was walking to school when I saw Caleb here walking to school and he suggested we should knock for you” I just couldn’t believe Caleb
“Hope thats okay i would hate to intrude on your breakfast” i had to speak other than just stand their and stare at him “oh no come in it’s okay i haven’t had breakfast yet so um come in i’m locking up anyway” hope that was enough “oh thanks” god even he’s oh thanks is cool as they stepped into my house he gasped for some reason “wow this is your house it’s really big almost a mansion you must be really rich eeh” oh god I didn’t want him to think of me as the rich kid who gets very thing she wants cause I didn’t I’m just a normal really normal so normal “oh thanks it’s nothing really let me just make my lunch and eat my breakfast bar then will head out you can sit in the lounge for a while the remote is on the shelf ,Caleb can I talk to you now please” He hesitated then said “sure” we walked into the kitchen “are you crazy I told you to talk to him not to bring here why is he here urrgg” I just couldn’t believe him and he just stood there smiling what kind of a friend was he “I knew you would freak out” oh he is so dead
“yeah well can you blame me what happened to just talking to him Cay” he didn’t like it when I called him Cay but he was still grinning it was creepy “why are grinning like that its creepy and unsettling” so creepy “oh nothing just the fact that he found me walking to yours and stopped me and asked if I was close to you I replied yes and he said if he could tag along and he said not to say anything cause it would ruin he’s cool but just to tell you know he didn’t say anything about liking you but I have a hunch” wow that was not what I was expecting at all I wasn’t sure if I was believing Caleb on this but I wanted to believe it ,it was something I so wanted to believe I could feel a soft tingling in me almost as if I was drinking hot chocolate after being in the outside in the winter without gloves and a hat and a scarf.
So anyway I couldn’t believe this “wait are lying to me so you can get of the hook or are you telling the truth cause if you are what’s the matter with you ,you could have gave me warning so at least I could have put on some make up and now he can see my spots your a mean person but I still love you” he smiled again and gave me a hug and right then Shaun walked into the room and some how said with a disappointed face
“do want some space or me to leave and leave you two together for some alone time” oh god he thought me and Caleb were going out his timing was terrible and Caleb just stood there in shock then finally murmured “uum it’s so not what you think we’re just mates well close mates” “Caleb” I jabbed him in the stomach “look Shaun we are really good mates but are so not going out I mean so not” “hey I’m fit you’d fancy me if you had real taste in dudes” “dudes what are you a surfer narly dude” “ hey I’m not your problem here and what ever happened to love you a minute ago” “hey I do love you but sometimes you get on my nerves anyway shouldn’t we go to school I’ll have to buy my”
“excuse me still here are you two going out or not” I forgot he was still here “no we are not going out if you really want to know I like you okay it’s out in the open I fancy you now you can laugh in my face and reject me” he slowly started to smile at me ready to reach the laughing stage but he didn’t instead he said “so I think we should go to school now” then he smiled again and said “I really like you too” I just had to say it I was curious “so was that you asking me out” he replied “no it was me saying lets go to school” then we went to school the walk was nice cause Shaun held my hand until we reached the school gate and then run ahead I just couldn’t get it he doesn’t want to be my boyfriend but he liked me a lot and to make it better Caleb told me I stilled had two other guys to go, all day was boring .
-later on-
“I don’t get it I thought he liked you but know is he too embarrassed to be seen with you or was he lying to you” Charlie was asking he really knew how to make someone feel better “gee you just made me feel a whole lot better about this situation” he winced “sos I didn’t mean it like that I’m sure it’s not like that” he was about to go on when Mel came stumbling and breathing heavily “I-I-I heard some thing you might want to know apparently Jolie carter asked out Shaun and Shaun said he’ll think about it and know jolie is telling people she and him will be togather.” Oh it’s not what I thought she going to say
“Lola are you okay you look like your about to cry” she was right I just couldn’t believe I knew I like him but I really thought he liked me but the worst part was it hurt so much and I was about to cry it hurt so bad and it was only like what five hours since he said he liked me it’s not like he said he loved me or anything I had to run and hide I didn’t want them to see me like this any second from now I was about to burst into tears so I said“j-just give m-m-me a min” I couldn’t finish my sentence cause I ran and ran I couldn’t see properly my vision was all blurry so in the end I ended up running into Lewis Stewart .
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- SO KNOW YOUR GOING TO MEET THE HANDSOME ONE AND ONLY LEWIS STEWART AND I GOT THE CHARECTER FROM A GUY I KNOW AND LOVE BUT THE NAME ..........:I------
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Teen FictionTalola is sixteen and never been kissed and she hates it so much since when every pushes her to do it bu twhen she discovers theres three boy's in her life she must choose and also find out whats happening with her weird friends can she mange it? wh...