Hey guys, this is my first story and i just wanna have feedback if its good etc, I've been reading wattpad stories for a while now and i've always loved writing so i decided to make my own [ BTW I am the worst at grammar bear with me =p ] ((((((((This is the prolouge)))))))
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Montana: "Jason it's 8:15 hurry up we don't want to miss the bus!" God I hate my little brother so much. Well he is my step-brother but still, like c'mon ever since Jason and Paul entered my life no-ones noticed me and its really p'd me off. I miss the old days when it was just me, mum and dad, why did he have to die! Especially on my tenth birthday.
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"C'mon Jason this is our stop, and say bye to your girlfriend." I said as I stuck my tongue out. I know hes the 8 year old I'm 16 so I got alot of stares. As we got off the bus, I noticed my only friend, yes my only friend. "Hey rosie how are you I so missed you over winter, it sucks that we lost numbers." To be honest she didn't look like she cared, well who would im a nerd and shes the head cheerleader, im positive shes got loads of friends to hang out with over the break. Ohh well, at least I've got a friend to see again. Lets just say I'm not the popular cheerleader type. I'm more of the baggy clothed thick glasses and scruffy hair nerd, but I still don't get how I managed to become friends with one of the most popular people at my school.
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Rosie: "Omg! courtney I missed you soooooo much, how have you been? how was fiji?" Good she replied, she pointed to here new dress she was wearing and giving me the stare, the stare that says cant you see for yourself? I stared at her still wondering how i became good friends with her, but i think she realised as she intreruppted my though. " So, have you finished your dare yet or is your heart just too big to?" she joked I really didnt like this dare, because i do have a big heart but hey a dares a dare right? "No you idiot, the dare was to be friends with Montana for a whole year then embaress her for her secrets infront of the school." She stopped at for a moment, then she looked at me like I just told her what she meant. "Its only been three weeks." As she finally nodded in understand. "Anyway I have drama now see you later, i walked off almost skipping as i realised Jake has drama too. Jake is my boyfriend and the captain of the basketball team, but he isnt just that dumb jock he actually had the heart to join drama just for me. I met with jake outside mrs lothandersers classroom. She had to be the funniest teacher in our school although it was really hard to pronounce her name.
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Montana: Great, drama my favourite class to start the semester and with my best friend, well my only friend. When i arrived at mrs lothandersers classroom i say rosie i was about to say hi again but the i saw jake the snake the most annoying person i have ever met. Mrs lothandersers eventually showed up to class and wow, last time we saw here she was about 30kgs wider but now she is so slim, lucky her maybe she has a fast motabolism, like most girls. She let us in and we all sit in our usual seats, yeh me alone since rosie sat with jake. Halfway through the lesson the door crashed open and in walked the most amazing guy I have ever seen he had ripped jean shorts a white top and a skateboard in his hand. He was amazing blonde hair and crystal blue eyes. Mrs lothandersers noticed that he was knew straight away. "Ahh mr recked so nice to see you." She began with class this is dylan recked ect. Then something shocking happened we had group activities and he sat next to me, the most handsome boy i have ever seen.
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A/n: So this is my new story i hoped youve liked it if you do please comment so i know to make more so this is chapter one. And what do you think of the characters? I know it was short but bear with me this is my new story i dont een know if i can publish it right =p //////////////This is the prolouge to find out if people like the story basis it will be amazing if this is good so comment and just say bad straight up dont be bias to be nice just striaght foward with me(And constructive credism is helpful)\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\
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Bullied by the devil, charmed by the angel.
Teen FictionMontana's just that nerd that no-one likes and is constantly alone and her real friend is her eight year old brother, until one day a new kid comes along and changes her life upside down.
