Chapters 1-14

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Hey, well for the past week I've been editing this story and made a few minor changes but it'll help this story quite a bit- especially in the grammar department. So, I completed editing each chapter just recently (like, a few minutes ago lol ), and ill be posting them ALL here, right now and I hope to have a new chapter for you in a short amount of time! I SERIOUSLY recommend reading this! xx

~Kim

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Chapter 1: I meet you.

"Louis you can't be serious!" Zayn spoke not understanding.

"I want to Zayn. And that's final." Louis huffed out.

"Can't you just go to the database? I've heard stories Lou... I don't want you getting hurt. I've heard some are wrong in the mind as well," Zayn looking conflicted.

"I'm going to Lucian House and that's final! I'm going to get a new sub, and I'm going to be fine!" Louis raised his voice a bit.

Zayn being the submission he is, cowards backwards a bit; Louis realizing immediately.

"I'm sorry Zayn... go back to Liam please, I'm leaving."

"At least let us go with you!"

"No! Now go back to Liam!" Louis' had it.

"Fine," Zayn huffed heading upstairs to his dominate.

Louis smiled now in the thought of a new sub. A sub to love, care for, and obviously pleasure. Quickly picking up his keys, Louis walked out to his Range Rover and started his hour long journey to get a loving new submission.

Turning on the radio the sounds of Firestones (feat. Conrad Sewell) by Kygo filled throughout the car. Louis smiled; it's a good song, not his favorite but still good.

Louis stopped at a red light, taking in the landscape. He's gotten so wrapped up in events he forgets the littlest things, like beauty. It was so beautiful out; sun arisen just a bit in the sky not yet noon, a light fog surrounding the flat landscape, little water droplets on the windows, the smell of fresh crisp air of the morning. Just beautiful.

Blinking back to reality, Louis noticed the light changing back to green. Starting his drive once more, he reminded himself to pay more attention to his surroundings. And his soon-to-be-new sub.

After about an hour drive Louis was pulling up to Lucian House. It's a place where abandoned, or unwanted submissions go. It's sad really. There should never be anyone abandoned or unwanted Louis thought. And if he could take every last sub back with him he would; unfortunately, he can't. But he also shouldn't be a hypocrite, there is a reason he doesn't have a sub.

Louis takes a deep breath before exiting his car and making his small walk inside the building, unaware of what to expect.

Looking around inside he sees maybe thirty submissions. They all differ, from height, hair color, eye color, clothing, language, and more. Louis starts to feel a bit nervous, even being a dominant doesn't stop you from being nervous. Even if some think they can't get nervous; they're wrong, so, so wrong. Louis steps more into Lucian House, meeting eyes with a blue eyed, blonde haired girl.

"Hello welcome to Lucian House. I'm Hayden, are you looking for a new submission today?"

"Yes." Louis stated simply.

"Any preference? Eye color, gender, height, etc.?" She asked.

"Male, maybe British to match my heritage, and possibly green eyes, if you could?'' Louis hesitated in response, while Hayden softly giggled at his uncertainty.

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