hi everyone sorry I was checking through my last part and I realized there were quite a few mistakes i had made so i tried to get rid of some but i probably missed some out!! so i am sorry about that. Last chapter was.. dramatic! hope you like it i've took a while to update but i am doing it now finally!! So this is chapter 8 (i think.) i hope you like it!! Please comment. tell me what P.O.V you want me to do? or something like that :)
Louis' P.O.V
How could Katie do this. What was wrong with her what was going wrong enough for her to jump of three flights of stairs. I know that her ex beat her up a few weeks ago now but that can't be why. I'm not saying she should of got over it or anything it's just we are all looking after her and Alfie is perfectly safe and he was with Paul again for the party. Maybe she was worried about Alfie. But why would she jump if she wanted to keep Alfie happy and safe. Maybe her ex did come back one day and she did't tell us?
It has been two days and she is in a coma I've have slept over every night and I am exhausted. She is expected to wake up tomorrow. All the people who are trying to find out why she jumped keep on asking me what she was like before and they asked me stuff about what she has been saying about her family. They asked me were her family are. "She told me that her dad and her little sister Alice are abroad. She says that her dad goes off with Alice lot's but he doesn't take as much notice on Alfie at all." I said. "and what about her mother." The nurse asked me. that was a point. "She has never mentioned her mum at all." "Oh do you know why?" she asked I said I had no idea.
Eleanors P.O.V
"Hey Jacob guess who I just got a text from. Louis Tomlinson! He says that Katie should be waking up tomorrow and would we like to visit. Should we visit?" "Yes obviously. But remember we have got to be really sad and kind and sweet so on so on." Jacob said. "Ok so you meet me here tomorrow at 10:30 am and then we'll go to the hospital. and check on sweet little Katie." I said "It's a deal!" He said then he said that he better get going so he ran of and left.
Katie's P.O.V
Am I in heaven?? Am i dead? what happened? Did I do this to myself? "LOUIS where are you??" "Darling" I heard someone say behind me. "Hello who is it?" "It's me turn around!" I turned around and saw a lovely slim tall women. "MUM!" I ran into her arms. tears streamed down my face. She pulled me into a warm hug. "You didn't do this to yourself it was Jacob and......... Ellie?" "Eleanor." Suddenly it all came flooding back to me it wasn't me! I just cried harder. "Look don't worry sweetheart you've got those boys to look after you. Harry, Niall, Zayn, Liam and Louis. And I won't forget those other girls who are they Perrie and Diana." "Danielle" I corrected her. "Oh yes that's it. And of course you've got Bella and Caitlin and Erin and Steph and all your friends from school. And you have got yourself a boyfriend." "What how do you know?" "Look honey I can see everything you do from up here but don't worry I hardly ever do because that wouldn't be very nice of me just nosing into your life. But I did happen to look down and see that beautiful kiss between you and Louis." "But I can't go back to him. I'm up here now" My mum tried to interrupt me but I wouldn't let her, "I am going to be letting everyone down. WHAT ABOUT ALFIE!!! DAD'S NOT HERE TO LOOK AFTER HIM HE IS IN AUSTRALIA WITH ALICE." "Honey calm down dad might not be but you are!" "What??? So am I alive or not." I was getting so confused. "Look at the moment you are not able to wake up but the doctors say that you will come round tomorrow." My mum explained. "How do you know." I asked "I know everything darling. Now speaking of your dad and Alice how are they. I can't believe your dad would just walk out like that i know he said goodbye but he just left you with Alfie oh and how is Alfie." My mum said changing the subject. "It's OK dad and Alice where fine last time i saw them. Alfie's great as well. And don't worry about me I am coping perfectly fine looking after Alfie especially with the help from other people." I said "That's great to know but I am so sorry but I have to go now." Again we hugged and stayed there for at least 3 minutes then we pulled away and went off our separate ways. And that was it.
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