Alright, I had tons of you comment that "Jeff's an Ass/jerk/whatever" Yes. I know this. But I'm not going to change him very much than I already have. I tried to make it clear that Jeff has a sensitive side. But he is unstable and it's almost impossible for him to show that.
And for you fan girls who think that Jeff would be your lover and he would automatically treat you like a princess. WRONG. He would A. Kill you. B. Laugh at you then kill you. Or if you're lucky, and God is sure as hell watching out for you, C. He will treat you like Lucy.
Jeff IS A KILLER. He's not going to be prince charming. I would love for this to be a happy story, but for the most part, it's not. And I don't think this should be. I already made him sensitive enough. I can't soften him up completely.
ALSO. Lucy isn't a complete saint either, she has CHEATED on Jeff and who is a KILLER. It's already wrong to cheat on your loved ones, let alone if your loved would just so happen to be a criminal. Also, she disobeyed him, not saying that he should run her life, but she should suck up to him just a little, because face it. Jeff wouldn't let her go if she tried to leave.
BUT! I promise the sequel will probably satisfy everyone else's needs. I won't say how either (;
But anyway! thank you for reading,voting, and commenting. This was NOT an attack to anyone who commented that Jeff is a total dick butt. I just thought this should be out in the universe for you all to realize, if you haven't already.
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Lucy the Seeker ( Jeff the Killer story)
RomanceLucy Evergreene is a regular high school girl, until she starts hearing a different conscience. Then realizes that she has a 'Secret Visitor'. And certain urges to kill her friends and family, find out what happens (:
