Good god I wrote this when I was 10. TEN. I'm almost embarrassed I wrote it, It's so bad. For the love of god they DROVE TO MELBOURNE. Like over the water I guess?? I'm so close to unpublishing this disaster.
I don't thing anybody is still reading it anyways. Sorry it sucks. I'm a better writer than I was when I was 10, I'd tell you to check out my other stuff but it's just some imagine books I wrote not many years after this monstrosity.