I'm thinking of rewriting the first few chapters atleast the first two or three. since this was my first book, looking back at them, they suck ass. my writing has improved a lot since than. so tell me. should I rewrite or keep. its up to u guys. does the beggining seem to be like 'this is a normal predictable fan fic' (which the ones of u whom have read further have found it not to be) or is it 'a perfect begining for catching attention' or maybe I should just delete them and start at the hotel desk. I want to kno!! so comment below! plz I usually dont do this but Im begging.
this will go on until October 30 is when I plan on counting votes
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HE GAVE ME HOPE!!!!!! (one direction)
FanfictionNatasha aka Nat has not always been living the best life. Yes she was a fashion designer and was filthy rich, but was always help back by her lazy no good drunken mother. when she turned 18 she broke free and moved to a hotel. then running into no o...
