Gosh, you are a saint if you have braved the entirety of that pretty long short story. As always, it means so much when people devote some of their time to something I've spent a lot of time creating, and infinitely more when they enjoy doing so.
At the end of this story, it would be amazing if those of you who felt motivated enough to finish it could tell me why you felt that way, or if any of you who weren't motivated and were simply skipping to the next chapter to see if it got any better could tell me why it wasn't interesting enough.
This would be especially fantastic because I intend on including this story in a collection of short stories that I am going to be self publishing this summer, so as many voices telling me what I've done wrong (I know there are a lot of things, I'm just too biased to see them) would be the most helpful thing in the world.
Thanks so much for reading!
-Josh
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Sunset on a Boat
Historia CortaIt's always best to be small when that's what you are, especially when you thought you were big.
