Broken promises

How every promise was told.Keep every promise.every promise broken and it's the end.

Four 20's which two girls are pregnant and two guys drove to this deserted place they actually regard as the most quiet place.never did they however know what was happening.

The housekeeper went out and told them "you cannot stay here.at night , theres this creature called batilicious that harm pregnant ladies.this creature feed on the babies"

"Oh do you think we believe your crap,you insane women."three teenage replied.

"I am sorry but we will make sure we leave this place before dawn alright!" Say the last girl.

All of them have fun,they eat they play.the last girl urging them to leave but they hesitate and promise at last. Erm feeling very annoyed,they decided to leave.

They started their engine and start driving it.the engine broke down at the wrong timing.they push the car and finally it started moving.

They leave the place but after driving for five mins not five meters away from the place,the car was down.

"Perfect huh?perfect? Let's just go back there and enjoy!" One of the guys said.

They had no choice but to head back to the house to rest a night.as they went back,the house keeper is no where to be seen.

They went to the room and saw some things.a pool of blood,and thing covered with cloth. Above the cloth,cover with slimmy body part of one like an intestine .

One of the guys put up the cloth and everyone shocked.it was a pair of legs.the insane women words float.they ran as fast as they could.

The batilicious found them caught the guy,the threes ran.but the girl refused.they were couple.how do you expect the other to leave when partner is in trouble? The other couple ran.

They met this white lady in the way and was told to go back to they house.they were puzzled.

"Spread the batilicious blood around your body so the batilicious won't smell you instead it's own blood!"she said.

The couple had no choice.they rather try then die.as for the girl,the batilicious put the guys to the ground and he was unconscious.

The girl then run after seeing the batilicious running after her.the batilicious caught her and...

The guy come into conscious and saw the couple but no where to see his wife she became worried and started searching.they saw the batilicious feeding on the baby and a hole around the stomach can be seen.the intestine torn off and her eyes wide opened died innocently.

The batilicious fed on her and flew away. She is died.died.they sat around her body till the sun rose.unable to take what had happened.they got help in the car and bought the body back as tears continued the journey.

Because not filling the promises thinking its nothing actually kill.the one who actually took the advice suffered more...