The last Akuma [Naruto fanfic] #wattys2016

The last Akuma: chapter 1: rescued

EDITED JULY 26 2016

Their laid the last Akuma. Trying to get away.

He got up only to be knocked back down
"stay down demon!" his beater yelled as he stepped on his back.

blood spurted out of his mouth, and his eyes became blood shot from the lack of oxygen.

"w-what...did i d-do" hiriko said. He asked himself that every day . He tried to refill his lungs with air but to no use.

"you are a Akuma you are a demon. I would end your filthy bloodline but its better to torture you, but today i will end you."He spat with disgust.

battered and beaten hiriko could not find the will to go on it was shattered long ago.

" I will kill you just like I killed your family, a fitting death wont you say." He went over to grab a sword and brought it over to him.

When he took the sword out of its sheath hiriko closed his eyes so he wouldn't have to see. It was still stained with the blood of his father.

"You b-bastard." He kicked hiriko over and brought up the sword over his chest and stabbed right trough, but to no avail. The sword just snapped in half

" Y-you bastard i-i will... i will." He stumbled to get up. "Bring me the chain next",

two henchman brought a long chain also stained with blood but this time his mothers. "Now leave us"

Tears started to stream down hiriko's face at the memory of that horrific night. His beater took the chain and wrapped it around his neck.

"Hmm, I thought you said something before I guess not."

He started to tighten it each time he struggled.

"Your face is just like hers when I killed her" 'this bastard is just asking for death wish!'

"Did you go deaf?...I said that I am going to KILL YOU!" The chain around his neck shattered.

He screamed in a fit of rage. His tears evaporated his pain went away. his strength came back his stamina as well.

A whirlwind of electricity started to surround him. This was it, he looked up at him.

With his new found power he had
unlocked the Genkai kenkai of his clan the hiragan.

His eyes turned to a electrifying blue. His beater started to shake with fear "what? Not so cocky anymore are you. Just what I figured would happen. He let out a loud roar and leaped towards him.

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The hidden leaf ninjas broke in to the building, not letting their guard down for even the slightest moment. Two hidden mist ninjas came walking down the long and dark hallway.

The hidden leaf shinobi quickly took them out. They heard a roar coming from the room. So they stayed away and focused on their mission.

They snuck into a room with hundreds of scrolls. The jounin looked around but couldn't find anything. "There all fakes" said one with gravity defying hair and a mask covering half of his face.

He threw shurikins at all of them, and just like he said they all disappeared in a puff of smoke. "So you figured it out huh." said on of the hidden mist ninja's as he jumped into combat but he was easily defeated.

The white haired man picked him up by the throat and slammed him against the wall " where is the scroll" he said in a calm voice " I'll never tell." " have it your way" he said as his hand started crackling with electricity "

The hidden mist ninja's confidence automatically washed away as the hidden lead shinobi's hand stabbed right through his heart killing him instantly.

"Now where is it" The voice. The hidden mist ninja collapsed on to the the floor as the genjustu released breathing, heavily he didn't waste a single second and just told him where is is

"its *pant* in the last room *pant* down the hallway"

He put the headband back over his left eye and knocked the guy out. One of the jounin looked over and said "Kakashi that was room where we heard the roar" Kakashi gave him a bored look "then don't let your guard down. Let's go"

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"You worthless demon! I'll kill you here and now!" Hiriko's beater yelled. "Not if I kill you first " they charged at each other but hiriko was faster. He punched in the stomach and twisted his fist.

The man doubled over in pain spitting blood out of his mouth. "You little shit". "Wind style: wind vortex!"

A vortex of wind started to form around hiriko and started to cut him drastically. Blood started to drop down from his arm, face and his chest.

The word' reverse' kept ringing in his head 'ah what the hell does this word mean! '"Reverse!"

The vortex dissipated and formed around him cutting him to near death. Hiriko was shocked that his mouth acted on its own, but he was thankful it did before he died.

"Now to end this" said a bloody and beaten hiriko as he got up and walked over to a nearly dead man and grabbed him by his shirt. "But before if do.

Who was the one who massacred my clan that night, and if you don't say I'll give you a more painful death."

He said glaring daggers at him. "I-it was a g-group of s- ranked criminal's. T-there name is the a-akatsuki."

Hiriko dropped his body and walked over to hiriko grabbed what was left over of the blade, and brought it over to him. "A fitting death won't you say"

Hiriko gave him a smirk then stabbed it straight trough is heart killing him instantly.

Blood gushed out from the new wound his dead body dropped dead on the floor. Blood started to drip down from hiriko's eyes from his first use pf the hiragan.

He breathed heavily when all of a sudden.

THUMP' the door was broken into pieces "what the hell" said one of the jonin the room was covered in blood from the 4 years of hell hiriko went through.

Their eyes landed on a boy and a dead man in front of him  "*pant*pant* f-finally someone c-came" hiriko said as he collapsed. 

A shinobi carried the boy on his back and left. A few moments later a boy came into the room about the same age as Hiriko to see his father dead on the floor "DAD!"

He screamed running towards his father "dad! Dad! Who did this to you? "He said sobbing, not expecting a response his dad replied. "I-I-I-it was the a-Akuma he d-did this to me."

He said. The boy helplessly tried to stifle his sobs but that just made it worse. "I-I I'll avenge y-you f-father I-I r-really w-will" his salty tears now mixing in with his now dead fathers pool of blood.

"I-i will" his sobbing came to a stop. his eyes now changing from they're usual black to a mix of white and pink with curved lines.

He has awakened the rinnegan.

Hey guys this is my very first naruto fanfic hope you guys like that chapter and tell me the flaws in this chapter tell me if I should change things or keep adding things anyway thanks for reading bye.