What Was Taken is back and rewritten. It took me a while but I have cristaljaime13 to thank since she never could stop bugging me about bringing this story back and I thank her for doing so :) I'm actually pretty excited to start writing this story again with new plots and ideas. But don't worry, the main parts will still be attached. Chapters will be longer than they usually were because I don't want this story to be too long like before. I'd like to get my point across sooner so that the story doesn't get my readers uninterested.
This story was created by me at a young age and when I read it, I could tell that the story was really unorganized and just plain too long to keep up with what's going on. This time I hope to make the story interesting with plot twists.
Anyway, I hope you guys enjoy the rewritten What Was Taken!
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1 | Ray
When I first saw him, I didn't think I was capable of getting so breathless just by taking a look at him. I had no idea that Paige would somehow find such an attractive guy for me to date. But she did, and I would have never seen that coming. But, I was still going to brush him off. Just like every other guy.
"Not interested," was the first thing that came out of my mouth in such a calm manner, I had no idea I could pull of with him staring at me with those silver intriguing eyes.
"Abbie!" Paige hissed. My eyes trailed towards her. I didn't even know she was standing next to the guy. "That was awfully blunt of you."
"What can I say?" I shrugged. "It's the bloody truth."
"You always do this." Paige rolled her eyes, crossing her arms across her chest. "I'm beginning to think your not interested in men."
"Think what you'd like, Paige. I simply have no interest in being involved with anyone."
"That's a shame," His eyes roamed my face, landing on my own blue eyes. "I really wanted to get to know you."
"Don't waste your time," I snapped, trying my best to not let him get to me. Even though he already was. "And if you don't mind, I really don't want to speak to either of you."
"Whatever, do what you'd like. I could care less," Paige snapped at me with anger and I expected the guy to do something similar to her, but instead he moved closer to me, each step suffocating me more. My back hit the nearest wall when he kept coming my way. His arm came up to land on the side of my head, his body inching closer than before.
"She may not mind, but I definitely do, Sweetness," His hot breath ran across my lips and all I wanted to do was capture it and breathe it in. "So don't speak like you know what I want. That will only get you in trouble."
Oh my.
You could say that I should've been afraid of the guy, but the funny thing about it was that I wasn't. Looking into his silver eyes could only make me feel overwhelmed with curiosity. I wanted to know about him, about his motives. I wanted to see him angry, just to see what he'd do.
I leaned in, my nose nearly touching his. "And who the fuck are you to tell me whatever the hell you think?"
He smirked, his eyes trailing from my lips to my eyes. "If you're asking what my name is, it's simple really," His hand reached forward and caressed my cheek softly, a quiet gasp leaving my lips, not stopping him. "So there's no need to make the question sound so difficult to answer."
I swallowed when the tips of his fingertips trailed down to my jawline, and back up to trail over my parted lips. He was really getting under my skin.
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What Was Taken
Romance"If you didn't want me at your place, you could've just fucking said," I bit out. "Instead of making me look like a damn idiot-feel like a damn idiot, hoping for a nice night with someone-with you." "Don't ever think I didn't enjoy you at my place...