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The totems watch me with sharp glares I had seen totems before but not this close up they were strange and intimidating. The tribe that were holding me stile were just what my mother had warned me about just before she died. She told me "Rinira do not let the ether tribes catch you" she died of a pneumonia after she had fallen in an ice river she was know wandering the plains. Now it was my time to join her I was thrown before the tribe leader he looked at me scornfully then raised his hand and shouted " she dies at sunset tomorow. I was carted of to a tent with two armed guards. I was tied to the central pole of the tepee. I sat there in utter silence until a sound pricked up my ears. I opened my eyes my mother was part of the eagle tribe so I had good eye site and my dad was part of the wolf tribe I nether new him. The back of the tepee was slit open and there stood a skinny tale boy I looked at him intently he grabbed me so I flipped him bout out his knife from his belt and held him to the floor."we're are you from and what is your name what are you doing here"
"My names Zayin noble iam from the eagle tribe I was sent to spy on the bear tribe but then found you I thought I would save you"
"Thanks"
"So who are you"
"Iam Rinira Oderian"
"You meen the daughter of the great warrior Shalan Oderian"
"Yes she is my mother"
"Where is she"
I answer bluntly " she is dead"
"Oh sorry but well we can't stay much longer or they will find us".
