Pls tell me my mistakes, I'm a beginner so I need your wisdom!
In my world of pain
My world of rain
I have nothing to gain
Thus I am to blame
Dying on the inside
smiling on the outside
Seeming to glide
But this is a rough ride
By myself, crying
Every day, I'm cracking
Emotions are hiding
A life I'm faking
Questioning life
It being unfair
Nothing for me to have
Nothing to understand
I'm trapped
Being pulled into a vortex
Sucked into nothingness
Happiness turning into sadness
I'm lonely
Every single day
No shoulder to cry on
No support to push me on
No encouragement
No motivation
I give my best
But all are put to waste
Happiness is taken
Sadness is given
It disgusts me
Hoping I won't come to be
Weak, yes
Useless, yes
Strength, lost
I have no one to love
I know this is a test
But suicide is best
I could rest
From this horrible quest
A horrible journey
A lot of tops and turvy
All bumpy
I am never steady
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This is purely made by me, also i suck. pls do tell me any mistakes i have and pls go easy ion the criticism. Thanks for reading this randomness i made. True feelings BTW. lol
(If u want to request
other me: I doubt it!
Shush! If u do just pm me i guess
other me: Whatevs. *walks away*)
