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" you will address me appropriately." The whip came down across my back again. Groans of pain escaped my lips as the sting died down and faded to a dull, aching pleasure. I wasn't sure why I liked...craved...loved this. Because of him this world now existed, not just the one of BDSM but the supernatural as well. He grazed his teeth against my shoulder and I stirred inside my leather restraints, knowing fully that he could end my life this very second. I felt his need for me, I'm sure he felt my need for him as well. "You've been bad, sir doesn't like bad girls" he picked me up off the floor and placed me over his lap, arms and legs still bound. "I'm going to spank you now" before I could react my left ass cheek stung like fire. A tear slid down my cheek but it wasn't sadness, but release. Because of him I could explore this darker side of passion. I now understood that in our dimension BDSM may be a dirty little secret to many but here, it was the way if life. Life here was beautifully erotic and mesmerizing, I could be part of it, all of it, because of Charlie.
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Garden of Pleasure
RomanceWhen Devlin Shire meets Charlie Bowers their connection is instantaneous, but can she handle his nature and where he is really from? In Garden Of Pleasure worlds collide and everything shes ever believed in is tested...love, trust, and ultimately he...
