part -13 hospital

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The dark love part part - 13. ( dark story hai.. Manan etni jaldi nhi milenge.. So plz wait for further parts.. Rather than asking me.. Manik kab acha hoga)

Recap - manik forceful s** and nandu standing on the edge of roof.. Manan phone conversation

Nandu - manik sorry to love u and trust u
Manik - nandu don't jump
Nandu ( with full broken voice)- manik
Manik was listening her carefully as it was last moment with her
Nandu continue - manik.. And sobbed a little .. byee
Then she jump from roof..
A strong voice heard by manik on his phn
And then phone disconnect

Manik Shouted- nanduuu!!!

He drivr car in full speed and reach in few minutes his place

The old servant saw nandu lying in the pool of blood
Old sev- nandu bitiya .. Nandu bitiya ye tumne kya kiya.. Utho na ( patting her cheek)

Manik reached their and saw nandu .. Her head is covered with blodd.. Even half of her face is covered with blood

Manik became shocked and ran to her.. He pushed old servant and took nandu in his arms
Manik caressing her cheek - nandu u can't leave me.. Plz utho.. U can't do this .. I promise Jo tum bolegi I will do it..plz open ur eyes
Manik then picked her up and rushed to car
He reached hospital as fast as possible

Manik running in hospital corridor - koi doctor bulaoe jaldiii
One doctor came and took her to OT room

Manik is sitting outside the OT room..

And old servant informed everybody..
He informed dadi,abhimanyu,soha mukti,and fab 4
That servant was crying and trying to find something
He was cursing himself that he must have done something before

He was busy in finding her diary .. ( nandu's diary)
Old servant started remembering something

Flashback

Nandu is playing with her dog ( dodo)
Nandu - dodo I know u are very smart.. Tumhe mere baare me sab pta h.. Now go and found my hat and give it to me

Dodo barked and found her hat and return it to her
Nandu kissed it's nose
Nandu - awwwy baby..
Old servant- tumhara chamcha h ye to..
Dodo barked and started taking round and round around nandu..nandu is laughing

Flash back over
Old servant pov- me dodo ( dog) se puchta hu.. Nandu ki diary kha h
He went to dodo who was crying for her owner mercy
Old servant caressed its head .. Old servant - dodo tum jaante ho na nandu ki diary kha h.... Hum dono ne dekha hai na wo ek diary likhti h..help kro na meri to find that diary

But dodo did not respond
Old servant ( shouted). - dodo tumhe nandu ki kasam .. Bataoe na

Dodo suddenly got up and started going to terrace

Dodo reached to a pot and started barking
Old servant understand .. And try to find out.. And finally found her diary

Scene change
Manik is is lost in previous manan moments
He started remembering their beach masti

Flashback
Nandu holding manik's hand
Nandu - golaa khaee plz plz
Manik - no no.. Not healthy
Nandu - but I want to eat plzzzzzz
Joining her hands cutely
Manik - okk but thoda sa
nandu jumped in joy and give a peck on his cheek.. And run to eat gola

He was crying on his deeds..
He remembered how she cared him...how he massaged his head... How she always make him happy.. Her laughing voice are echoing in his ears..

Manik pov- ye Mene kya ker diya.. Mera plan to sirf usse apna banana tha.. I don't want to broke her.. I don't want to kill her . why?? She commit suicide.. She herself gave her body to me.. But kya ye meri
mistake h
Manik heart - of course u killed her.. U bloddy killed the person who loves u .. Who cares for u..
Manik mind- no manik tune kuch nhi kiya.. U only make her urs...
Manik's heart - noo u hurt her .. U hurt her badly.. U almost killed her.. U have to be punished
Manik shouted - no no no .. Mene galat kiya... Ye sab meri wazah se hua h....
He started crying
..
After two hours ..still operation is going on
Manik is continuously crying
Abhimanyu and mukti with fab 4 reached their and dadi too
Manik saw dadi and hugged her tight..
Dadi- are bacha himmat rakh kuch nhi hoga nandu ko
Abhimanyu - ha broo .. My sister is very strong she will be alright
Soha also came
Soha - abhi bhai..and hugged him tight
Soha - sorry abhi bhai.. Sorry.. Ye sab meri wazah se hua h ( she is also crying)
Abhi - tumne kya kiya
Manik was looking at soha blankly
Soha started telling how nandu told about the video.. And how she cursed and abused her

Abhi - mujhe tum se ye umeed nhi thi..
Soha- bhai sorry.. Wo me gussa ho gyi thi.. Pta nhi Mene unintentionally usse kya keh diya
Abhi - don't show me ur face again.. Pehle tumhari wazah se humare dost ne suicide ker li .. And ab nandu ki jaan bhi khatere me h
Soha touching abhi bhai feet
Soha - no bhai plz mujhe maff ker do...me sachi me jaan ke nhi bola usse...
Abhi making her stand
Abhi - ess baare me baad me baat krenge.. Firstly nandu health is more important

Abhi called his best neuro surgeon ....
Neurons surgeon came
Abhi joining his both end - plz save my sister plz
Neuro surgeon- I will try my best

Manik was sitting quiet in one corner.....
He was busy in remembering
Flash back
Manik- noo I don't want to eat this..
Nandu - u have to eat this... It is good for their health.. Manik - nooo noo noo
Nandu - u have to eat this .. Now open ur mouth
Manik - nhi krunga
Nandu - aap kerenge.. She hold his cheeks and pressed it.. And make him eat forcefully
Manik - u are baddd
Nandu - I knowww...
Nandu make him eat all food
Nandu about to goo.. Manik caught her hand
Manik- sit na plz
Nandu - okk
Manik encircled his hands around his waist.. And he hide his face in her long hairs.
Manik- ur hairs has peace
Nandu smiled and caressed his back
Manik kept on hiding his face in the crook of her neck

Nandu- head ache to nhi ho rha??
Manik- hmm thoda sa
Nandu- me abhi massage kerti hu
And she started massaging

He cried and remember their moments during manik and soha marriage
Nandu- manik jeeju u are looking hot.. Soha di to flat ho jaegi.. Then she started laughing . and manik blushed
Manik - tum bhi beautiful lag rhi ho
Nandu - thank u ..and show her beautiful smile..
Manik was just lost in her
And then she started giggling playing laughing teasing with aryaman and other friends

Flashback over

Manik pov- she loves me purely.. And what did I done.. I just ruined her.. I ruined everything.. Her smile which is beautiful.. I am responsible of loosing her smile

Scene change
The old servant is moving towards hospital having nandu's diary in his hand

Scene change
The doctor came out
Manik stood up with seeing him

Doctor - she is very serious.. May be we will not able to save her
Manik - noo u have to save her

Abhimanyu - plz save my sis plz
Soha- plzz save my sister

Manik clutching doctor collar - i dont know ki tum kya keroge but bloddy damitt save her
Old servant came and slapped manik
All shocked
Old servant - meri beti ko esne maara h.. Wo mere pass roti thi.. Ye dekho uski diary ..read it.. Giving it to abhimanyu

Abhimanyu reading her diary

( I am not mentioning all things that nandu wrote in her diary .. Only some part)

Nandu's diary - aaj manik jeeju ne mere sath jabardastii kerne ki kosis ki.. He touch my neck and back.. His touch is Sooo dirty.. He threaten me not to tell anyone about him.. Otherwise he will harm soha di and abhi bhai . I love them both..
...... ( and many more that happen that day,, u can go through parts)

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He almost raped me today.. But I saved myself some how. .. I cried begged in front of him .. But he finally show me some mercy,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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Soha di ne aaj mujhe bahut bura bura sunaya... I saw her video kissing someone.. She abused me.. I cried a lot.. My heart broken into pieces.. Pta nhi me kaise manik ke pass pahuch gyi ..... ( u can look at parts if u forget)

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Today doctor told me that manik is in depression.. After that day he did not forced me.... I am happy very much..

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today manik saved me like a superrrrr hero .. Apni Jaan per khel krr.. He saved me.. I was scared of all the goons.. But manik to hrithik roshan ki trah dishum- dishum kiya .. .............. ( some more things)

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I think I am in love with manik
I know I am sound funny.. But yes he was monster but now he is my heart king.. I love him crazily.. He was avoiding me.. But I still care

Recap - continue nandu's diary... Abhimanyu beat manik ..
Nandu ran away from hospital...

Scene change
Manik ( shouted) - where is nandu???
Soha slapped him
Soha- acha hai chli gyi.. Tum jaise monster se durr
Manik- noo she can't do this.. .. She is mine only mine....

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