The half blood prince

My dear lily

Tuesday morning, after I ate my breakfast . I tell my mom that i will just go to the field. I walked from our house to  the field i passed many muggles .
Snape:it very nice today
Snape :why that tree has big hole
Snape :maybe it s a house
(Walking  towards the tree)
When I arrive on the tree I went inside found a huge room filled wands and potions .i think why is the inside of the tree large and outside of tree small
man :who's out there
(Voice echoed)
Snape :hello  my name is severus
man:oh why are you here
Snape :I noticed that theres a big hole in tree
man :you see i am a wizard this tree is my house
Snape:Do you like to collect potions
man:yes
(Footsteps)
man: oh hey there: my name is aberforth
Snape:could tell me what are this potions
Man:this is amortentia -love potion, and skele-gro -medical potion
Snape :thank you for teaching this to me
Aberforth :you're welcome do you want me to teach you more 
Snape:yes
Aberforth :this wand is made unicorn hair..
After he discuss some core of the wands I said that I should leave because my mom will be worrying for me
When i m almost outside i here some voices.i began to run  when im outside I saw beautiful girl  standing  near the tree i pick of flower  then it fly towards here hand  she smiled at me and smiled  at her after that,  i ask her if you wanna see a beatiful lake. She nodded . And we walked about few minutes the we have arrived at lake we began lay down and talk
Snape :what your name
Lily :my name is lily
Lily: and what's your name
Snape :my name is severus
Snape :who is that your running from earlier
Lily:my sister , petunia
Snape:why is she telling that you're a freak
Lily:maybe she worried
Snape:maybe she's jealous because you're special time she's not
Lily :that mean severus
Snape :what your school
Lily:hogwarts
Snape:what year are you in
Lily : it just my first time ,oh the school in friday
Snape :right
They talk..after that conversation they decided to go home as they were going home they saw many muggles talking and using their gadgets after that last street we decided got apart and go home but before lily could leave .i said to her
Snape:bye
Lily:bye severus ,see you tomorrow
When i got home , I said hi to mom and dad and went to the dining room to eat after I ate and brush .i headed to my room to lay and sleep .....