The half blood prince

Welcome to Hogwarts

This Morning,mom left early to buy me a ticket to hogwarts while my dad help pack up my things after few minutes , dad's phone ranged  my dad check it out while i finished packing . After I finish packing, dad told me  we could go to kingscross station  early . After we arrived at kingscross station  mom was there early  so  walked  up to platform 9 3/4.  I tell mom that is no  platform 9 3/4. Then began to  walk fast through the wall then i said
Snape:watch out mom
Snape :i do not like to see this (closed eyes)
Then this happens my mom dissapeared . I told my dad why did mom vanished?
Dad:that  a magic wall, son
Snape :oh ,so you just walk fast through the wall
Dad :yes,
(Dad and i push my things through the wall)
Dad:and now your in platform 9 3/4
Then we saw many wizards and witches saying bye to their children
Then we saw mom, and  quickly get my things and put it on my  assigned
room,the mom said:
Mom : severus,  you forgot your  ticket and money
Snape :thanks mom
Then the conductor said all abroad. Then the students began to go inside the train .when i was in  my assigned room. I went  to the window and i said to my mom this:
Snape :bye mom
Mom :bye gonna we  will miss you
Then a girl began to go inside to my room . But that girl was lily
Lily :hello my name is lily  evans
Snape :hello my name is severus snape
Lily :are you the one  who I met in the field
Snape :yes
Lily :how you doing  severus
Snape :ok..
After we had a talk, lily suggest that we should wear the the proper clothes at hogwarts then i said ok after few hours later ,the train began to stop and  lily suggest that we should leave .then lily began to her things . i rest for few minutes and  pick my things and leave. And huge man lead us to some
carriages and tell us to ride the carriages all the way to the castle then i rode the carriage with lily and some other wizards
Then  were at the castle grounds  .then huge man tell us walk all the castle door then when  were .their was witch standing .and she  introduced  herself us professor minerva mcgonagall . The doors began to open then the professor  tell us to go with her,we pass some students and later  we saw many professors in a large table  then the professor who sat in the middle rise spoke some news and tell his name (prf.dumbledore  .then professor mcgonall  began to talk
Professor minerva:  when your name is Heard,sat on this chair the hat sort you to your houses
Then she to mention few names and later called lily evans
Sorting hat :um ,gryfinddor
Then me:
Sorting hat:a i smell ambition um...... Slytherin
That time lily  talked to another boy  in gryfinddor  table while i sat a on slytherin table .
Dumbledore:let the feast begin
After i ate ,prof.dumbledore tell some fifth year students to escort the first year students houses when we arrived at Slytherin house. the fifth year began to say the password  then the door opened and tell us where are the rooms and leave.then i began to go upstairs and sleep ....