Story: Reality VS Online
Author: L0verF0rever123
Status: On Going
Reviewer: DespiteLove0_0
Cover:
The Cover is simple and nice. It fits the story just perfectly and attracts people because of how beautiful it is.
Grade: 9/10
Title:
I don't see how the title is related to the story. But the story is still not completed so it might make sense as the story goes on. The title itself is attractive though so I will give it a chance.
Grade: 7/10
Summary:
So they author summarized the story with two sentences. It doesn't give us much details but the two sentences were nice and somewhat deep.
"Will my true love be a real guy or a screen?"
"Will I ever meet the boy who stole my heart or is it just a dream?"
After reading this, all I wanted to do was find out about the boy who stole her heart and why is it compared to a dream.
Grade: 9/10
Characters:
The characters are sweet and lovable. I loved how the guy Ashley is dating is actually sweet and adorable. Definetly not a cliché. I didn't find any of the character annoying which is a plus side.
Grade: 8/10
Length:
The chapter were kind of short. It's good that you write in details but you should try to extend the chapters.
Grade:6/10
Plot & Grammar:
The plot is amazing. Everything happened in order and the grammar was just perfect. Either you edited the story really well or you just paid alot of attention when writing the chapters. Good for you!
Grade: 9/10
Overall Grade:
8/10
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