Book Of Honest Reviews

7-My Neighbour And His Best Friends

Story: My Neighbour And His Best friends
Author : RQ-DMD
Genre: Teen Fiction
Status: On Going

Cover:
The cover is quite simple yet very beautiful. The only error I noticed is that there are actually 3 guys. But in the book, its only Logan and Wyatt. Other than that, the cover is perfect and I don't recommend changing it.
Grade: 8/10

Title:
The title is attractive as almost everyone loves stories including a neighbour next door. And the friends are a bonus. Good title 👌
Grade: 9/10

Summary:
Taylor Hayes is a 17 year old girl who has been through a lot. She has moved to a new town with her adoptive family, where she meets her new neighbour Logan Evans.

He's cool, cocky but knows when to be serious. When Taylor goes to school she faces a few problems that lead her to meet Logan and his three best friends, Wyatt Underwood, Hayden Davis and Eleanor Stone. She soon becomes friends with them but only to face a whirlwind of lies, dishonesty, love and friendships that could maybe develop into more over time...

But with Taylors trust issues that are based on her past will she be able to stay in this town for long without getting hurt?

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The summary explained the story well but it has some mistakes. Logan is described as cocky but when I read the story, he is actually really sweet and friendly. Also, Taylor is said to have trust issues, but she warmed up to Logan and his best friends really quickly in the story. Other than those few errors, the summary is fine.
Grade: 7/10

Grammar&Spelling:
The grammar is good. I didn't find any grammatical mistake. The spelling however is different. There are a few spelling mistakes and punctuation. You also forgot to add a period alot in the story. But it's not that bad actually, with just slight editing, the problem can be fixed.
Grade: 8/10

Character:
I absolutely loved the characters. Logan is sweet and adorable, Wyatt is funny and childish, Eleanor is scary yet friendly, Hayden is simply amazing. And Taylor is the best of them all, she stopped up to the queen bee and even though she's adopted, she still still treats her adoptive presents like a her real ones. Well done.  👌
Grade: 10/10

Overall Opinion+Grade:
The story was quite funny and entertaining. Other than the few errors in the summary and story, the book is perfect.

Grade: 8/10