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Eleanor's POV .

Louis has been acting weird lately , he hasn't been talking to me lately and I'm starting to get worried

Louis POV

So tonight is the night I'm going to purpose to Eleanor tonight I'm so nervous. I want Jackie to help me out with this.. "Jackie" I called since Eleanor's out with Perrie I don't have to hide anything "yes daddy" she asked "well tonight I'm going to purpose to mommy" I said and the smile grew on her face "that's so cool daddy" she said excited "ya I know but I need your help" "what do you need dad" she asked so I told her the plan "well I'm going to ask you to go to the park across the street with mommy then come home and ask can we go to the beach and hopefully she will say sure but If she says no just put the puppy dog eyes ok and so you will take her down to one side of the beach and ill pit on a swim suit and make a sand castle that says "will you marry me" on it and ill be on one knee and hold out the ring and hopefully she'll say yes" "she'll say yes daddy" "thanks princess so lets get ready"

--------2 hours later---------

"You ready Jackie" I said "yes daddy" she said "ok show time"

Eleanor's POV

"Hey mommy can we go to the park jackie asked "ya sure let me just get my shoes on" I said

----- later -----

"Mommy can we go to the beach for alittle bit I've never Been there before" Jackie asked "ok baby girl lets go get our swimsuits on" "yayyyyy thanks mommy" she said so happy "no problem now lets go"

When we got there we went in the water and there was this big hill of sand but the weird thing is Jackie kept on looking over it and nodding I wonder whats tht about.. "Mommy can I show you something" jackie asked "yea" I said "ok but you have to close your eyes" so I did and she led me to a place where I didn't know where since I couldn't see "ok mommy open your eyes" so I did and I couldn't believe what I saw Louis made a castle that said will you marry me and I turned around and Louis was on one knee and said "Eleanor o loved you since the first day I saw oh and I knew you were the one now me you and Jackie will be a family so Eleanor Calder will you become Eleanor Tomlinson and marry me" I was crying but happy tears "YESSSS yes I will marry you. I ran up to him and kissed him and when we got home the rest was history

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