Love of the Monster

Chapter 29

Rachael's P.O.V

It's after school and I quickly ran out to my car to go to the hospital. I haven't heard anything from Breanna since I left last night. I finally decided to tell Louis what really happened with Bre. He agreed not to tell Harry until its the right time. He said they're doing great they are going through boot camp now, so it will be awhile till I hear from him again.

I quickly drove to the hospital and quickly went up to her room. Well she hasn't moved any. I walked over and held her hand.

"C'mon Breanna wake up. You have to!" I said.

Nothing.

"Squeeze my hand, wiggle your toes. Just show a sign that you're still here," I said. Then I felt a light squeeze on my hand.

"Breanna!!!! C'mon open your eyes!! Please!!" I said.

Nope. She didn't open them but she did squeeze my hand again. I went to get a doctor to see if he can tell when she will wake up.

Breanna's P.O.V

Well I'm still stuck in this dang coma! I want out of here!! I then heard someone hold my hand and say something to me.

"C'mon Breanna wake up. You have to!" It sounded like Rachael.

Of course I couldn't respond.

"Squeeze my hand, wiggle your toes. Just show a sign that you're still here," she said. I tried, I know it worked because she said,"Breanna!!!! C'mon open your eyes!! Please!!"

I tried but I just couldn't. I can squeeze her hand but I'm too weak to open my eyes?? How can I be so weak!!!!! I'm a werewolf for crying out loud!!! Well my body was pretty much slammed around in the car accident.

I felt her let go of my hand. I guess she just left me. Then I heard a make voice say," Breanna can you hear me? If you can squeeze my hand." I guess that was the doctor so I squeezed my hand.

"Can you open your eyes. Squeeze my hand for yes," he said. So I didn't squeeze his hand.

He removed his hand, but I heard him say," Well that is a good sign. She can hear us. Now all we have to do is wait for her to open her eyes." Then I heard a door open and close.

So all I have to do is open my eyes? Well I better keep trying everyday.

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Hello everyone. I AM SO SORRY. I know this chapter sucks and it's so short. I just had to end it there so I can have chapter 30 be the final chapter of the story.

PLEASE DON'T HATE ME OR THE STORY!!

I have a new fan fic out. If you guys care enough to read it, it's called The Nerd with a Secret.

I also really want to know how did y'all find my fan fic. Also if I made another vampire fan fic about a girl who is Louis Tomlinson's sister would y'all read it? Also will you read the sequel?

Please comment and tell me if I should start the fan fic about Louis Tomlinson's long lost sister?

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