Dawn of Hope

Allegiances & Info

Here you go, I've finally decided to give in and write a full length fanfiction. It's probably going to be really cliché, so sorry about that. I'll do my best to make it different and more interesting to read.
I was planning on making it take place during Bluestar's time as leader and before book one, but trying to stay to the character of everyone would be a little too difficult, especially for my first time, so instead it's the typical made up characters. I wasn't going to write out the Allegiances because who reads them anyways? But, I remembered that two years ago I made up a ton of Clans out of boredom and still had a group of four Clans buried somewhere. So, I dug it up and decided that I'll use a mixture of characters from those four Clans to make this one.

ThunderClan:

Leader: Thornstar - small brown tom with two white forepaws and dark brown eyes

Deputy: Quickstorm - sleek dark gray tom with deep blue eyes and a torn ear

Medicine cat: Feathercloud - very light gray she-cat with darker markings and green eyes
Apprentice: Parsleypaw

Warriors:
Reedstripe - reddish-brown tom with blue eyes and a black stripe across face
Apprentice: Thistlepaw
Strikeheart - older light brown tabby she-cat with white markings and dark green eyes
Dawnshadow - calico she-cat with leaf green eyes
Roseshimmer - cream and red she-cat with sky blue eyes
Apprentice: Dappledpaw
Beechclaw - light brown tom with a black chest and brown eyes
Apprentice: Baypaw
Clayflower - tan and white she-cat with light brown eyes
Showerstone - long-furred blue-gray tom with one blue eye, one brown eyes
Apprentice: Nettlepaw
Cloudwhisker - pure white tom with a brown muzzle and amber eyes
Apprentice: Mistedpaw
Streamflight - nearly black she-cat with silver paws, tail tip, and eyes
Windfeather - brown and tan tabby she-cat with yellow eyes
Apprentice: Flowerpaw
Birchfire - silver and white tom with bright amber eyes
Apprentice: Pansypaw
Silverstorm - pale gray she-cat with darker silver tabby markings and light blue eyes, several small scars on left shoulder
Needleslip - lighter brown she-cat with forest green eyes

Apprentices:
Parsleypaw - golden tabby tom with yellow eyes
Thistlepaw - black tom with white speckles and blue-green eyes
Dappledpaw - beautiful golden dappled she-cat with green eyes
Baypaw - light brown tabby tom with pale blue eyes
Nettlepaw - long-furred gray she-cat with yellow eyes
Mistedpaw - medium gray tom with light silver eyes
Flowerpaw - mottled she-cat with hazel eyes
Pansypaw - red she-cat with ginger forepaws, tail tip, and yellow golden eyes

Queens:
Ivorystone - extremely light gray she-cat with star-bright silver eyes
Daisyshadow - creamy she-cat with black chest and forepaws and brown eyes
Kits: Skykit, Birdkit, Firekit
Winterfrost - pure white she-cat with dark blue eyes, deaf in one ear
Kits: Frozenkit, Sparrowkit, Shellkit

Elders:
Gingerpelt - orange tabby she-cat with green eyes and gray muzzle
Desertfur - black and tan tom with aqua eyes and a scarred chest
Cedarfang - red tom with a scared and graying muzzle with orange eyes
Splashmist - white she-cat with uneven gray patches and green eyes, retired early due to a lamed leg

I purposely put in a few more characters than I need so I can kill some off (I'm know, I'm a cruel author. :P). To those who may read this story that I (hopefully) will actually try to write, please, please review! That's the only thing that will keep me writing! I need to know if you liked it or not and would love any constructive criticism! Thank you and hope you enjoy. May StarClan light your path!