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Her name is Joe.
First thing: The sun.
I mean, SIX YEAR OLDS probably drew the sun better than me when I was 11. Like, who would've imagined that I thought the sun looked like that? Same thing with the cloud. I feel like it's just there for "extra decoration."
Plus, the sky looks all dark, even if it's supposed to be a sunny day.
Second: The hairstyle.
Oh...my...God. The hairbands are ATTACHED to the ears, which look like B's, by the way. And it's like their is a gap between the ear and the other side of the hair, which looks repulsive.
Third: The clothes design.
UGH, who BARFED on it and gave Joe THIS?! They're literally just scribbles on a shirt, and the pants? They're like those candies, Fruit By the Foot, right? It looks RIDICULOUS. And I definitely do NOT know what I was thinking when I put green shoes on the grass.
Speaking of which, the grass are like waves on the sea, except it's green. But, technically, if the sky is green, then the water would be green, too.
BUT THE SKY AIN'T GREEN.
Four: The face and body.
I think that the lips are too fat and big, and the nose looks like a bird's beak. Something also went wrong with the eye area for some reason. Her eyes don't have any color on them, and she has NO eyebrows. Like, WHO RAINED ON HER PARADE?
And we have that hands-on-the-hips thing all over again. *Shudders*
Here's the improved one:
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First of all, I like her stance better than the last one. I mean, it looks a bit more feminine, right?
Secondly, the outfit looks MUCH MUCH better than before, as well as the shoes. Sure, they're kinda the same design, but I just drew it in a different way.
The sun looks a smudge more natural, just like the grass, sky, and clouds.
Things I would fix in this, though, are the arms. AGAIN. And when I drew in the outfit, I realized how much of it looks like a watermelon. I could fix that too.
Anyway, hope you liked it. Be sure to comment if you have any other suggestions on my artwork, and remember to vote and follow as well!
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