This Story is Done

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Let me just start off with saying that this book is getting way off topic from what I wanted it to be. I think within the first chapters I just lost focus of my main goal and started getting other ideas and starting other relationships and just... disaster.

So I think it's obvious that I've given up on writing this book, so I'll just tell you what I had in mind when first writing this.

1.  Clearly in the very beginning, there is this girl, Rose who is crying after finally writing about what happened in her youth.

2.  You know how there's Adrian, and he is so sweet and caring? Wrong! I was planning on going on and on, showing how honest and thoughtful he is! And then, once I've made sure you all had fallen in love with him, I was going to crush all your souls!!!

3.  Adrian ends up actually being a bad guy. And I'm talking, like, perverted, sadistic, Bastard! You know how Rose is crying in the very beginning? It's all Adrian's fault! I wasn't yet sure how, or when exactly, but this asshole, was going to rape my poor, sweet, trusting Rosie!

4.  I know that that's just plain terrible, but it was going to happen. So obviously Rosie is betrayed, scared, and she doesn't know what to do. She was only 13 going on 14, and the guy that she liked and trusted did something like this to her.

5.  She doesn't tell her mom, or Jessica, or Kylie, and especially not her brother Trey who is best friends with Adrian.

6.  Rosie becomes timid and is always on guard, scared of what Adrian might do next. And this dumb bastard, being the great little actor he is, goes on with life as though he didn't just rape his best friends 14 year old sister. He still comes over to her house, talks and laughs with Trey and her mom, and even acts really nice and sweet, and freaking innocent around Rosie, but she knows  better!

7.  Well that is what I had originally had in mind. I didn't get to thinking of what would happen after all that. Would I finally get to the part where it's present time and she's done writing? Would she finally tell her family and close friends? Will she get justice somehow?! MAYBE SHE'LL JUST KILL ADRIAN!!! I DON'T KNOW!

So yeah, that was going to happen.

But let's face it, I honestly wanted to write more about Jessica and Chris. Because Chris actually is a genuinely nice guy who cares for Jessica, and he wouldn't try any relationship with her until she turned 18, because he doesn't want to be that guy *glares at Adrian*. And also, those two were most likely going to get married and have two kids by the time she's 25 and he's 29.

And for all any of us know, I could've made Trey be gay and he would probably end up dating his other friend Devin, the mature one with the glasses that I wanted to write more about, and they would be a super cute couple. But know we'll never know because I failed.

Well I think my rant is over now. So just know that I won't be writing anything else for this story, it's just way too off track, there's no saving it.

Sorry, and Peace Out    ~(._.)/

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