Nandini......no more????!!!

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Manik reaches home teary eyed and still lost thinking about nandini when little ranveer and rithik rush towards him and hug his legs hard crying their hearts out.
Actually payal and the kids were at home as she had to take care of her newborns and ranveer rithik too.

Manik, on feeling some weight on his legs ,looks down to find the kids crying...he immediately goes down on his knees and engulfs them into a bear hug...while trying to pacify them as well as controlling his tears. He knew he has to be strong for the kids...
He kept patting their heads and back till they were okay...

Ri:(broken voice) t...ta..tata....nothing will happen to nandu tati na??? She wl be o...okay...na??

M:(kisses their foreheads) nothing will happen to ur nandini chachi....i promise...

Ra:nandini plomish??

M:(smiles faintly) yeah nandini promise....now both of u go and take some rest...before tht eat something...

Gives them to kk and aishwarya as they too have returned....

Ra: did u eat tata??

M:no

Ri: even u have to eat...take( forwards a bite near manik's mouth)...

M: no baby u eat...i wl eat later...

Ra:..tata u knw ....nandu tati says tht we shud nevel (never) say no to food when someone is unwell...because...if u stay hungly(hungry) then how wl u take cale (care) of the unwell pelson(person)...

Ri: so tata if u dont eat then how wl u be stlong(strong) to take care of tati??
So eat..

Manik and the others are awestruck at the maturity of the small kids....

Here both of them feed manik with their own hands...

After tht manik goes to his room and breaks down crying recalling evrything....his slap ,harsh words and most important....him not trusting nandini...
From the side table manik takes her photograph...and cries holding it close to his heart...

and cries holding it close to his heart

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He reaclls their romance ...stupid fights and their pacth up etc..
And this song is playing in back ground....and the characters are manik and nandini in happier times.

He wipes his tears when he hears a knock on his door...thus forcing him to come out of his beautiful flashback...
He opens the door to find payal there...

She immediately takes him a sisterly hug...and pacifies him tht nothing will happen to nandini..

M:bhabhi...nandini will be okay na...??
Aapne mujhe roka kyun nai bhabhi jab main nandini ko itna galat samajh raha tha....sab meri wajah se hua hai...sab kuch....aur woh soha...pehle bhi hamare beech main daraar (rift) daal chuki hai....

P:no manik...u have to strong now...aur hamari nandini ko kuch nai hoga...yaad hai..woh kya kehti hai hamesha...

Both recall nandini saying...

"Arre itni aasani se main iss duniya se nahi jaane wali...arre abhi toh mujhe apne baccho ki love story aur unki shaadi bhi dekhni hai...unhe aur apne grandchildren ko manik aur meri love story bhi suna na hai...aur phir apne grandchildren ki shaadi bhi dekhni hai...so marna is not possible now.."

Manik smiles remembering tht...and payal wipes his tears...

P: manik fresh hokar hospital jaao...main baadme aa ungi...go...and dont worry nandini will be fine...

With this manik leaves for hospital.with a bouquet of red roses..... her favorite....

At hospital...

Manik reaches and goes to see nandini...and places the bouquet on the side table...whereas all the other ppl were sitting with tensed faces...outside...

Nandini is still unconcious....manik holds her hand  and talks to her asking for forgiveness..

M: nandini tum mujhe chhod kar nahi jaa sakti...accha meri baat chhodo....tum mom dad fab5 dadi bhaiya bhabbi and baccho ko chhod kar nahi jaa sakti...aree tumhe abhi toh hamre baccho ko aur unke baccho ko apni love story sunani hai...phir shaadi bhi dekhni hai na...chalo wake up....get up nandini open ur eyes...chalo...nandini tumhe pata hai..i  dont like this drama...chalo
(Shakes her shoulders...)

Suddenly nandini starts breathing heavily panicking manik...
He immediately shouts for the doctor.

Hearing his shouts all family members and freinds pitch in the icu with the doctor...

The doctor checks nandini who keeps on breathing very heavily....while all the other ppl keep parying to god to save their nandini....

The ecg machine beeps...but suddenly...it shows...a straight line and all hear a monotonous sound...and screen freezes on everyones shocked faces....

Nandini's heavy breathing slowly subsides down and she lies their lifelessly...

M: (shocked) d..d..doctor ..nandini ko kya hua...??

Doctor checkes her and says

Doc:im sorry manik...but nandini is no more...

All: Whatttt!!!!

M: NANDINIIII!!! (falls near her) nandu u cant leave me....u cant...pls wapas aa jaao...tum jo bologi waisa hi hoga...main woh hi karunga jo tum bologi...kaho toh main tumhaare liue jaan bhi de doon...par pls mujhe chhod ke mat jaao....i love u...tumhaare bina nahi jee sakta...

All the ppl are shedding tears near her.recalling their sweet moments with her.....and manik cries hugging nandini.....

While crying...one drop of manik's tears fall on nandini's eyelids and she moves her eyes...there is a slight movement in her fingers too...due to which the ecg machine strts beeping once again...and all stop their mourning to look at nandini to see her trying to open her eyes...

Manik immediately calls for the doctor...he puts the oxygen mask around her mouth and checks her...and then happily decalres tht nandini is out of danger now....

Do: its only beacause of ur love manik tht nandini has returned to you...aaj tumhaare pyaar ne science.ko hara diya...ur love is so powerful and pure tht even god could not go against it.....take good care of her and dont ever lose her...now let her sleep for a while...

Manik and others' happiness knw no bounds on hearing this news and all thank god for saving thier nandini and manik hugs her tightly....and her kept clinging on her till cabir pulled him away saying...

C: arre abhi abhi uski saans wapas...aayi hai...uth us par se....

All have a hearty laugh at his statement...and then the nurse asks them to leave and let nandu rest.

How was it.??
See nandu is alive...
Now for sometime there wl be a comic seperation track between manik and nandini....needed in the story...
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Love u all

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