a better ending to allegiant by Veronica Roth

IF YOU DIDNT READ ALLEGIANT THIS STORY CONTAINS SPOILERS. DO NOT READ IF YOU HAVENT READ DIVERGENT, INSURGENT, OR ALLEGIANT. I DO NOT WANT TO SPOIL IT FOR YOU

I wrote this because I was very pissed with the ending of allegaint. I will probably get hate for this one too but its better. also follow my instagram @fangirling_prodigy for pics of legend and divergent.

deticated to the fans who cried during allegiant

I open my eyes. I see Tori looking at me. "well done! lets see your test results" she says. I just noticed im in my Abnegation clothes, the ones I wore when I took the test. "whats going on?!?" I say. I was just shot by david twice and im pretty sure I died since I saw my mom. Also. ... Tori died. I was there!!!  Tori now looks at me again. " you just finished the simulation part of the test" Shes looking at me like im a lunatic. "wait.... this cant be real" I mutter. " I already took the test! im divergent! remember?  I picked dauntless? you gave me my tattoos for goodness sake!!!" Im yelling now. " we went to go outside of the gate and you were shot!!! you died Tori!!!"  Tori's look is horrific.  "Beatrice calm.down. I know everything. I saw what you saw on the screen over there" Tori points to a screen outside the room. "It was all a simiuation.  From looking at your scores you are divergent. Thats not a bad thing though. it just means you fit in all categories and have..... " she stops. " its not safe to tell you here. come here at midnight and ill explain"  " Wait.....how long was I in the simulation" I whisper. " 3 minutes. which by the way is a record". she smiles. "see you later" I whisper.

when I leave my parents are waiting for me. im shocked but grateful at the same time. I still have no idea what is going on but im fine with that as long as im with my family. then thats when I realize I have no idea where Tobias is

At midnight I go back to where the test was held, just like Tori said. shes waiting in the test room on a computer.  "ok now can you tell me whats up?" I whisper when I approach her. "first up, you saw events that happened in the past. For example: divergents being considered dangerous."  shes still looking at the computer screen. "well how does it explain that I met people who supposebly dont know who I am?" I snap. "Because Tris, thats part of your divergence. you met people in your simulation who are also divergent, and they saw you also in their simulations." theres a secret faction located in the border that separates the other factions apart. the faction is called divergence.You can transfer their secretly. we as a society think it's best for divergents such as yourself." she says. But that would mean leaving my parents,  who I thought died. "ok how do I tranfer" I whisper.

The day of the choosing ceremony, I tell my parents my results and that im going to the divergence and that ill vist when I can. Then I meet Tori at the end of the Abnegation gate, and climb over it. "wow your really brave for being a stiff" she says while smirking. "well, I was dauntless in the simulation that seemed real so I guess it rubbed of on my."  "by the way Beatrice, we need to pick other divergents up at their gates"  I honestly just noticed shes calling me 'Beatrice'  "um... can you call me Tris for now on?" I ask her. She nods in agreement.

we got to the Dauntless gate. please be Tobias and Christina. Please be Tobias and Christina I pray to myself. Tori takes out a whistle and blows into it.  I see some familiar faces. Uriah, Marlene, and lynn.

our 2nd stop is Candors gate. Then thats when I see them. Christina and.... Al. thoughts go through me like a river. my friend I thought was dead. my kidnapper.

then we go to Erudites gate. Thats when I see Will and Cara come. Its so good to see will not shot in the head from my doing.

we travel all the way to a tall building. "Tori, I thought divergence was a faction, not a building" Uriah mutters.  "it is. all the divergents live their, including your brother" she says. Im guessing she means Zeke but how would I know.