a better ending to allegiant by Veronica Roth

Intruder alert

The next day I hear a voice... I open my eyes and see caleb. "WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU TRYING TO BE A CREEPER!" I yell at him. I forgot Tobias was asleep and he gets startled.  "Tris calm down you almost gave me a heart attack" Tobias mutters.  "What are you thinking beatrice? Sleeping with a guy??" Caleb says harshly. I get up and smack him. He looks hurt but I dont care. "DONT EVEN GO THERE" I say harshfully. "I already did" he says sternly. I'm so mad now. I jump up and lunge at him but Tobias grabs me and holds me back. theres no use tying to fight back so I don't. "Your so lucky Tobias stopped me. I would of strangled you" I say so seriously, you would think im kidding cuz im so serious. Caleb just looks at me shocked. "What has gotten into you Beatrice? you seem like a creul Dauntless Tyrant" He says like hes shocked. Tobias puts my down since im shaking with anger. "Well I wouldnt get vicious if you didnt trespass on my property OR keep trying to control my life OR bring my boyfriend into this!!" I yell. "Well you give me no choice Beatrice!!! You wont let me help you!!! There are consequences for your actions!!!! You can't just go around sleeping with random guys Beatrice!!" he yells. thats it.  I Lunge at Caleb and Knock him down. I punch him and slap him. "For one its tris so stop calling me Beatrice!!! for two hes not a random guy!!! hes my boyfriend and I love him!!!!!"I yell in his face. Tobias comes and picks me up so I cant do damage. Calebs face is all red and hes clutching his jaw, where I punched.  Tobias sets me on the bed, then ties me to the post by my waist with rope. "I dont need you to go to jail for killing your brother he tells me". I just nod and kiss him on the cheek. "Can I have my phone pretty please" I ask in a little kid voice and bat my eyes. he nods and goes to get my phone.  when Tobias is about to grab it Caleb grabs it and throws it to the floor and it smashes into pieces. "WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU?!" i yell at Caleb. he doesn't answer so i Slip through the rope cuz Tobias didnt tighten it so i get up, grab Tobias by the wrist, push through Caleb, and leave the room

When Tobias and i leave the room i sprint down the hall to Christina's room and Tobias follows. When we get there i knock on the door and she doesn't answer. "Damnit" i mutter. "Lets go to Zekes he can get Caleb out" Tobias whispers. i nod. "Later i need to get a new phone" i sigh.

When we get to Zekes room, me and Tobias pound on the door. "Geez guys don't need to pound on the door" zeke says. I see everybodys inside. I walk in and get to Christina. "HELP ME MY BROTHER WONT LEAVE MY APARTMENT!!" I whisper loudly in her ear. she gasps "GUYS GET YOUR WEAPONS WERE GOING TO TRIS'S APARTMENT!!" Christina yells. "He smashed my phone also" I say. she screams and I cover her mouth. "geez chris didnt think it would freak like that" I say. "Well its phone abuse and you lost all the pics we took!!" she whines. "I backed it all up" I smirk

We all decided we would have "jobs" when we get caleb out of my apartment. Zeke and Uriah are going to remove him from the premises. Will and Christina have weapons in case he pulls anything off. Everyone else is backup. Me and Tobias just stand their and watch. well Tobias is there to protect from Caleb too so I guess it doesnt matter.

"1 2 3" Zeke whispers and Him and Uriah go inside and everyone else follows. when we get inside Caleb is where we left him. "PHONE ABUSER" christina yells. Me and Tobias Laugh.  "Come on your leaving" Uriah tells Caleb as they go to escort him out. "I dont think so" Caleb mutters and pulls out a Tazer. Every one backs up except me, "Give me the Tazer. now" I tell him. he doesnt answer. I back up and jump into a lunge but I get lifted by Zeke since I was near him. "Tris dont even try" He whispers. Then he hands me to Tobias and tells him something and he nods and takes me out of the room. "Put.me.back.in.there" I say seriously.  he shakes his head. I sigh. "Its not that. Caleb is after you. he may take you or something" he whispers. He takes me to Christinas room and we go into the closet. "We need to stay in here till we get the signal from Zeke" he tells me.

Hey guys I ment to post this yesterday but I didnt finish. Comment any suggestions cuz im running out of ideas. I have a Book Analysis due dec. 13 so I may not be active srry

~Tess♡xx