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Name: Hyacinth
Very unique name. A real life flower and according to Greek myths the name of a hero who was killed by a metal frisbee as he tried to impress his boyfriend and ended up creating the flower from his blood. (At least that's my interpretation)
Gender: female
Tribe: Unknown
Age: 12 in human years
Personality: quick, agile, but a zombie in the morning. Has a short temper and thinks herself as a monster, but is really kind and sweet inside. She only wants to be loved.
Ok! So she's kind of an angsty character which is fine. (Wake me up wake me up insideee) not really a problem here
Appearance: This is where it gets weird. You see, Hyacinth is a hydra (currently 3 heads) with emerald-green scales and gold and black highlights and deep warm brown eyes.
Mmmmmmmm ok. The mythology behind it is Greek myths (once again.) one problem I have with this is that it's a bit disconnected from wings of fire. Are tribes other that the seven we have confirmed? Yes, but still this doesn't seem to be the type of thing that would appear in a wings of fire book. I think this would work better without the fan character aspect of it.
Backstory: when Hyacinth was an egg, her parents went suddenly missing with no trace of where they went except a scroll saying: "My dear Hyacinth, you are my heart and my soul, and it is with deep regrets that I must do this. I have left you with your father to protect you...... But never mind about that, I hope that who ever is taking care of you has taught you to read and write and is treating you kindly. I must leave now..... Never forget that you are very special and the world has special plans for you. You mean the stars to me Hyacinth, you mean the stars. Farewell Hyacinth, forever."
This is fine but lacking in details of than this one part of her life. Who took care of her after this? Where did she live? Where did her parents come from?
Other: has a weird obsession with shiny stuff. all her heads stand for her personalities. The more heads that are cut off, the more and more vague the personalities get.
That's a cool detail! Very interesting.
6/10 I think I noted all my problems above that will explain this. It is a cool OC however, and I hope you will take these things into account.
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