What Did I Do To Deserve a Fate Like This?

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"NO LET ME GO YOU CREEP!!!!" I yell at the man who was about to kill me.

"Hmm.... No." He said as he held the knife to my throat. Tears stream down my face as I realize I'm about to die.

+-+ One Week Earlier +-+

I'm woken up by my mother yelling "ASHLEY GET YOUR ASS UP!" I quickly get up and get ready. Putting on my shoes I rush downstairs and into the kitchen to hear my mother yelling yet again, this time it's at my father.

"Shut the hell up! You don't know shit!" I sigh and grab an apple from the table and say bye as I rush to class, realizing I'm late I rush through the halls to get to class only to get in my seat a few seconds before the bell rings, signaling class has started.

The day went as normal as any others and nothing was out of the ordinary, I get home and do my homework. Just because I have horrible parents I'm not letting it get in the way of my education.

The next day was the same except this time a weird guy followed me most of the way home. This continued for the next 3 days or so. It's friday the final day of school for the year, I was glad school ended on a friday, it left time for me to plan some stuff to do on the weekend and overall it was just satisfying. To have it end right at the weekend.

+-+ Current Time (aka that night) +-+

"Oh god, I'm going to die! I don't want to die, not yet, please no...." I think as the man holds up the knife to my neck.

"Shh don't worry, it'll be quick, unlike your parents, granted they got what they deserved, they were horrible, starving you like that, not caring that you're anemic and all" He said almost laughing at the end. He pushed the knife further into my neck causing a line of blood to appear I start crying and he just laughs. He takes the knife away and uses the point to carve a heart in my cheek and an arrow into the other side that pointed at the heart.

"W-why are....y-ou doing th-this?" I asked clearly scared and in pain. He laughs yet again.

"Because, it's my job sweetie." he then slits my throat. I fall to the ground, and blackness. I look around, 'is this what death is? Just a black empty space?' I ask myself, I then see a calming blue light appear. I walk through the light only to find myself in a forest, filled with nothing but trees and a breeze you'd feel during fall, cold but warm, even the trees are all in fall, the leaves are orange, red, and yellow, and falling to the ground. Is this what hell is? Or heaven even? Or is this just some form of Limbo? A purgatory for those who've died and can't even be judged? Oh well, one way to find out right?  

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So yeah, second part, what did you think? 

4- It was amazing and whatnot

3-I liked it

2-It was okay, could use some work

1-It was bad, too short, (or) needs MAJOR improvment

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