Okay, well. These poems are older, and they aren't very good. But, I would like constructive criticism if you would want to give it to me. I'm kind of new at this so, I'm still getting the hang of it...
But, just tell me what you think.
By the way all of these poems and stories are written by me, and I think my friend is in the process of writing one. If I post that one I'll be sure to give her credit. But yeah, just let me know.