Hey everyone! So, I know I haven't been updating the othe story BUT, I thought if people didn't like my other story maybe they could check out this one! So, here it is! Engulfed in flames: Chapter 1!
A gray mare entered the town of Ponyville with bags under her eyes, hair sticking out everywhere and bones showing. Her tired red eyes searched the bustling town for any friendly faces. Slowly walking through the crowd, a white mare with a curly purple mane gasped at the state the mare was in. She ran up to her, gasping again.
"Oh, my dear! How could you let that happen to your mane! No buts, you're coming with me, darling." She ushered the beaten up visitor to the Carousel Boutique before calling her friends, informing them of what she had found.
"You must be famished, my dear. Let me get you something." She said as she trotted up to the gray mare. "Renegade.." She murmured.
"What's that?" She turned and faced her.
"My name.. Renegade.." Renegade spoke, louder this time.
"Renegade, what a beautiful name. You can call me Rarity, my dear." Rarity smiled to Renegade before strolling to the kitchen.
Renegade closed her red eyes, but not before taking in the area she was in. She was finally here.. Ponyville.. She could finally begin what she had planned years ago...
A/N: Hey hey hey, guys! So, this is going to be my very first fan-fic that I did by myself! Sorry about the short chapter, it's just meant to introduce you to the storyline. Sorry for any grammar mistakes and character mistakes! Anyways, hope you like it, criticism is appreciated but nothing too harsh. Picture of Renegade on the side!
Thanks for reading!
-ScarletSage
