Review Book

I Wish

Review by ~ Deepiholic
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I Wish

By : AliviaSaha

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Writing style :

Your story is very beautiful written. I love your dialogues!

I don't know how you came up with the small I wish thing you wrote in the beginning of you book, it was beautiful..!

Please go through your chapter once more because I did spot some grammatical errors, they weren't that big of a problem but it would make your chapter  beautiful if you edit it.

Continue writing chapters as long as you wrote this one.

Cover ~

The cover is simple and nice but I would recommend you to enhance it more so that it attracts more readers because as I always said that people do judge books by there cover and I don't want it to happened in your case because your story is so beautiful.

Storyline ~

I love Harry Potter fanfics and that's the reason I was ready to review it even though it wasn't a Bollywood related book.

Your book didn't let down my expectations in any way.

Beautiful storyline.

Overall ~

I assume this is a review for the opening of the book. Anyway guys go read this book, it is so beautiful and this is definitely for all the H.P fans out there.

For me it was a ~
4/5

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Paybacks -
Please spread this book to all you friends and help me find my next book.

P.S ~ I'm a big Drinny shipper myself.. 😍

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This review is totally based on my opinion for your story and you can always make your book better right ? I have no intentions of hurting anyone's feelings, this review is just for the betterment of the book.

- Deepiholic 💋