Daughter of a traitor |Fred Weasley

Chapter 2

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*October 31st*

We were standing in formation in the hall way ready to go in when we were announced "And now a big welcome to the proud sons of Dumstrang" Dumbledore said and we started to walk up the hall I could feel a lot of eyes on me mostly because i was the only girl I walked with my dad and Victor I saw the twins from the world cup out of the corner of my eyes and bit my cheek so I wouldn't blush okay I admit it i think one of them is cute as we got up to where Dumbledore was standing and he walked down the steps and hugged my dad "Igor" he said "Albus" my dad said he turned to me and smiled "Lorelai you've grown in to quite the woman i must say" he said "Thank you Albus it's good to see you too" I said with a big smile before taking my place with my friends Albus went on to explain why we were there before the food came to the tables we started eating the boys ate like pig's as always I could still feel people staring at me and my anxiety was kicking in i elbowed Victor "I need to get out now" I whispered to him he signalized to Callisto and Jason two of his best friend to go with me they nodded at me and we all stood up and walked down the middle of the hall I was walking in front of the two of them they looked mad even though I knew they weren't that was just how they look when they are walking behind me they all do that my heel's where clicking all the way down the hall and it made everyone shut up and look at me I hold my head high and held my pace even though I wanted to run out and cry right then and there I made it out and we went back to the ship for the night.

I, Callisto and Jason are in the same year and have been best friends since they knew what was wrong in a heartbeat and hugged me and I broke down "MOVIE-NIGHT!!!" Cameron yelled making me jump " Oh come on Lore you need it," Jason said fine I said and chuckled at them Cameron arrived with everyone else he just said what we were all thinking "Fine everybody in they're PJ's" I yelled and everybody went to their rooms to change

*Fred's POV.*

I didn't pay attention to what Dumbledore was saying I figured it just was the usual information it wasn't until the door's swing open and a bunch of girls in blue dresses came in I looked up from the table I was too busy thinking about the girl from the world cup "And now the proud sons of Dumstrang and their Headmaster Igor Karkaroff" Dumbledore said a bunch of guys came marching in and then I saw her she was walking close to Karkaroff and Krum she was scanning the room when she saw us I smiled at her but she looked away quickly she was wearing a dark red dress that fitted her perfectly when they got to the end of the great hall she stood still next to Karkaroff who hugged Dumbledore he looked at her and said something to her I couldn't hear it but i think it was a compliment because she hugged him before sitting with the others "I thought Dumstrang was an all boy's school" Ron said "That is Karkaroff's daughter Ron honestly you saw her at the world cup" Hermione said the feast started and the Dumstrang's looked like they haven't eaten in years everybody was looking at the girl who sat there she leaned over and said something to Krum before she got up with 2 of the guy's following close after you could hear her walk down the hall properly because she is wearing heels and everybody turned silent and stared at her she held her head high but was white in the face and looked like she was about to break down when she was out of the great hall everyone went back to they're chatting "What do you think Fred?" George asked I jumped at the sound of his voice "Wh-what?" I said "staring at that Dumstrang girl again are you" he chuckled "No I was just in my own world again," I said "yeah right," Hermione said laughing the other Dumstrang students left at the same time they were talking what I think is Bulgarian about something they all seemed to agree

*Later that night*

I was walking in the hallway by myself I had gotten permission from Dumbledore to stay out half an hour more than the others to clear my head i was walking in the hallway when someone bumped in to me "I'm so sorry" a familiar voice said "That's okay i guess i could have used some lights" I said "Yeah I properly could to" she laughed "Lumos" she said and her wand light up and could see her face "Your the Dumstrang girl" I said kinda surprised "Yep that's me" she said with a smile "Isn't it an all boys school?" I asked "Yeah it is but my father will not let me out of his sight after my mom died so... I'm stuck with the boys" she said laughing "I better get going" she said "I'm Fred by the way" said "Lorelai see you around Fred" she said with a big smile "Yeah see you" I said just standing there like an idiot "Nox" she said and the light went out as she walked out in to the moon light.

A/N The first few chapters will be semi the same I have changed things in each chapter this was previously chapter 3-4 let me know what you think

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