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“I love you…”
“I love you too…”
Those were the words I always say and hear everyday…and it makes me want to die.
HI...My name is Joam Miharbi. . 17 years old. I’m studying at Harvard University.
And I’m in love with a girl. A lovely girl..
Yeah. I’m in love with her.
Her name is Hannah . She’s blond, tall, long-haired, pretty, with kissable lips, sweet, caring, and everything you always thought of what a perfect girl is.
We always hang-out together. And I always thought it was only just a dream.
You bet it is.
All I can see is a Paradise. Plain sight. Only her.
It seems like I’m trapped. Traps I’ve always want to live by.
I wanted to stay there forever. Be with my love, be with Hannah
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Yeah.
I’m in a Paradise. In a trap.
“Where are we?” I always ask her.
“Does it really matter?” …that she always answer.
“Not really but…”
She suddenly grabbed my hand and started to stroll.
I followed her.
We ended at the end of the Paradise.
And then I noticed something up….a beach?
“Where are we?” I asked her again
“In a beach. Your favorite place.” She answered gracefully.
I faced her and kissed her.
She blushed.
“I love you Joam,” she said.
“I love you too, Hannah.” I replied.
And then I noticed a tear in her eye.
“Why are you crying?” I asked, quite confused.
“You have to promise me something…” she replied.
“What is it? I’ll do anything for you.”
She took my hand and replied, “Don’t leave me.”
“Why would I? I will never, ever leave you Hannah.”
She hugged me. I hugged back.
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It was one of my dreams. To be with someone I love in a Paradise. In a place where no can find us, or disturb us.
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It was a perfect moment. A moment I’ll always wish would repeat.
She was sitting in a bench under a palm tree while enjoying the peaceful view in the place.
