Bell's Adventure

Chapter one

( I have nothing to do so I thought I'd write a new part to the story)

It was a normal day for Bell looking around blankly.  She had asked her mother why everything was black for her to which she had answered "Y-your blind so you can't see thing other wolves see..  But that makes you special. " she had chuckled nervously  after explaining  to the small pup. She lifted her head a sent sending her back to the present. "Berry?" She called out hopefully  to her friend.  "Bell!!  Let's go play!" She said excited.  "But Berry didn't your mother tell you not to go out of your den to go play with a wolf?" She said the last part scornfully.  "Oh well!  Let's play! " she yelled and the ran off leaving only her sent for Bell to follow

(Time skip a little after( berry is a bunny BTW)

Screeching was the only thing Bell heard at first.  A 'tractor'  as her mother called it had almost ran Bell over.  Her mom jumped and had pushed out of the way getting hit herself.  "Rose?" Loki cried out hopefully as he stared at her mangled body.  "Bye Loki , W-watch over B-Bell." She managed out before her head fell to the ground with a sickening thud.  "Berry go home." He growled out before turning to Bell. "Bell to the den now. He growled out after Berry had left "but moma..She has to wake up." she whimpered out " "she's gone,  now go! " she scampered to the den not knowing what was to happen.

(What do you think?  Better than the last chapter?)