loveing a thug

The End

            ΠΠΠ Robert's P.O.V ΠΠΠ

        "Look GiGi I don't have time to be fooling around with your dumbass. I want full custody of my seed if its mine." I was explaining to her dumbass that she ain't have full custody of nothing.

     "You not having full custody! Because we gone be a big family when that loose hoe leave! And I'm moving in or else I will tell the cops that your-" I swear I can't stand this bitch!

    "Ok damn. But, if these test results come back and it's not mine you outta here." I hang up. Man I'm tired of this bullshit.

     I walk into the living room and hear crying. I hung up my jacket and set my keys down on the table.

     "Liyah what's wrong?" I hate when females cry, its depressing and be getting a nigga emotional.

     "Nothing Rob I'm good." She tried to get up but I pulled her back down.

     "Something's up and I want to know. You can't keep all of your emotions in or else you would go crazy. Crazier than you already are." On that last line I tried to crack a joke, but I guess she took it too seriously.

    "You inconsiderate ass nigga. Crazy? I'll show you crazy! I lose my everything. And you want to call me crazy!" She starts smashing shit and throwing shit at me. I was hiding behind the couch trying to duck that shit before a nigga loses his eye or something. It forreal forreal looked like that Janet Jackson scene from Why Did I Get Married 2.

      "Fuck you Robert!" She yelled and walked out of my house. I waited until I seen her turn the corner and ran after her ass to see where she was going. She don't understand that my feelings for her grow each day.

              Aliyah's P.O.V

    I can't believe this nigga actually tried me. Calm down Liyah he doesn't know about her.

I walked all the way to the graveyard where my baby was buried and my grandmother. I walked over to my grandmother's first.

           Delilah Rain Barrington

                       1984-2011

            A great grandmother and mother

       "Hey granny baby! I wanted to see you first today. Sorry I didn't bring no flowers today,but I want you to know I love you. Its been a lot of stuff going on G baby. Momma still doing her foolish stuff. I met a good guy tho. But, I think I messed it up today." I kissed her gravestone and went to my baby grave.

                 Nivea Amerie Rain Barrington

                  2011-2012

            Loved and Gone too soon.

       "Hey baby girl! Mommy misses you I want you too know that. You will always be in my heart. I hope Granny baby up there taking care of you. Imma go know tho. Mommy has to go make things right with a friend of hers." I kissed her gravestone a couple of times before wiping my tears and dusting the dirt off my jeans.

       "Ali I haven't seen you in a while." I turned around and seen Nivea Amerie's daddy, Diondray. He pulled me into a hug and wiped the tears off my face." What's wrong Ali? Come on let's go to my place. Let me speak to my baby girl first." I seen him walk over and put some flowers on her grave, said something, then kissed it. I seen him do the same thing to my Grandmother's grave too.

     "Liyah what's going on?" I turned and saw Robert standing looking from me to Dion to the graves.

      "Nothing Rob. Just go home. I can't be in a relationship with you anymore." I told him just staring back at Dion talking to both of the graves.

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