Wolves of dawn book 1 shadows

Prolouge ok this story is 4 omq_dragons for being a fan :D thx omq

Ok, first, and yes another story. Thank you for all ur support my wolfies! (if ur new, that is wat I call my fans) if I see any sort of copying we will all track you down. If you would like to submit a fan chracter to be in the backgroundh or help them, just fill out this form in the comments. And remember, you can find me anywhere in animal jam if u want to meet me!
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The forest was full of deer, it was summer almost fall. A pale white wolf launched towards a large sick deer. The deer scrambled to its feet, jumbling its noises together in a terrorized moan. The wolf sprinted towards the deer, sinking its teeth into its leg. It let out a shattering Yelp then bucked the wolf in the face as it jolted into the forest. The wolf cursed under his breath. As A red-tan wolf came out of the bushes. "You can't get behind it, kilan" he said. Kilan grumbled then rubbed his face. "You need to learn to hunt a deer" he snapped. "Ok, I get it, gramps" he mumbled. "I am only three years older than you, and five years worth more mature, mr. Grumbles!" The wolf barked " and my name is Jackin to you!". 'Whatever' kilan thought with a quiet growl. Kilan saw jakin trudging away and followed like a mouse follows cheese. "You must learn to hunt proprley, or you have a great chance of being omega, and we don't want that do we?" He said, quickening into a jog. "Nope" kilan replied. Kilan an ahead to meet up with Artemis, his best friend. She trotted up to him, swaying her fluffy tail behind her. "Oh, come on, did you fail again today?!" She groaned. He slowly noded. "You're gonna be beta, and soon, the older pack members are almost elders, which means that we will soon become warriors, well I, will become a warrior, you on the other hand" she continued. He glanced around trying to avoid her lecture of why he will become beta. The dull cave was overhanging the meeting zone, gray green moss swaying back and fourth. A little stream squirted out the side and into the river that ran along the camps coastline. The lush trees danced in the wind while smaller ones bent over like giants was stepping on them. The alpha slowly droned along to the edge of the overhanging. Kilan turned his head towards the alpha and trotted towards the gathering spot to listen. "Everyone" the alpha howled "it is time for the warriors to become elders, and trained pups, to become the next generation of the beta pack warriors" he finished." Which means it's time for a naming ceremony, all yearlings, come forward and receive your full names"