We adopted a vampire!!!

The beginning

Saraph! I hear a young voice shriek. I groan and turn to see Izzy. My only friend here at the orphanage. But that's fine, I don't really like talking to others. I wouldn't have been talking to Izzy had i not saved her from our evil caregiver.
Flashback
I'm walking in from my nightly hunting and I hear crying. I really want to ignore it but I'm can't. I know what it's like to cry like that I've done it and I vowed never to do it again. So I turn and fallow the noise. I will never forget the sight of what I saw that day..."Shut up you stupid little whore!"our caregiver Johanna screeches at Izzy, while Izzy just sobs quietly into her knees, she looks terrible. I can see the fresh bruises on her pale skin as she cries. I see Johanna go in for another blow and that's what sends me over the edge. But in a matter of seconds I'm standing in front of Izzy in a defensive position. But you know what sucks? I can't use most of my powers against her cause she's human. I grab her hand before it comes down again to hurt the child. I feel my eyes flash orange with bloodlust. But I won't do that."What the hell do you think your doing Sara?" The she-devil asks, her eyes blazing with fury of me stopping her. I ignore her question "I am saving an innocent child from your abuse, now I suggest you walk away!" I put as much venom as I can into that sentence and she knows it I saw her visibly flinch and words and tone. "To hell with you, you little bitch" she sneers and stomps away.

"Thank you" I hear a little voice whisper. If I wasn't a vampire I wouldn't have heard it. I turn to the little girl."Hm?" I ask She looks up a little" Thank you for saving me"she says again this time louder. I look at her and smile. She just looks ate as though contemplating whether or not to trust me. I lean down and frown a bit as she flinches back from me. " No need to thank me Izzy, I was just doing my job. Now how about we go get you cleaned up?" I ask She smiles and nods. I pick her up and walk to the room we share with 4 other girls after that day I've always protected Izzy. And the orphanage,but no one needs to know about that.
Since then I promised Izzy I would always take care of her. And I have.

End of flashback

Now Izzy is like my baby sister and I love her like the world. She was 5 then, now she's 9. And happy as can be.

Back to the story...

"Saraph!" She shrieks again, I groan and roll over causing Izzy to fall off my bed. "Ow!" She say while scowling at me. I just blink innocently. And laugh. I get and do my morning necessities before the bitch of the orphanage gets up. Annalisa Montgomery. She thinks she owns this place cause she goes around here bullying the younger kids. Anyway as you know life was not on my side. As I walked to go get Izzy I bumped into the queen bitch herself. She smirked at her minions Kate and Ashley Jones. There twins anyway they smirk at each other before turning to me, as I inspect my nails before I have to crack them on their faces. Like the rules say I can't use my vampire strength and most of the powers but I can still use some so I turn to the three girls and return the smirk......I let my eyes flash red with annoyance, and see them take one step back. Then Annalisa being the dumbass she is throws the first punch....

How was it, was it bad?

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And I hope you all like this book.