The Day Before the Dark Returned

Chapter 2

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When the dark receded I saw I was in an aircraft of some sort. It looked like an old bomber. Me and the team I was with before I blacked out, were all strapped into seats across from me. I looked around and saw some fancy computers, well at least fancier than anything I've seen, On the wall beside me. While I'm doing a scan of the room I notice something, there's a man in the corner hunched over some books. He has a pistol strapped on his side.
Not good. Let's not let him know I'm awake, I thought.

I tried to study the man as much as I could before he starts to turn around and I quickly squeeze my eyes shut.
Come on control your breathing.
In out.
In. Out.
I tried to forget everything that was happening. I tried to be asleep.
I felt a hand on my waist.
No.no he found you out.
Then I was hoisted up on a shoulder. I felt him move, the tension in his mussels, And his shoulder blades move back and forth. I felt him hoisted me down and buckle me into something.
I squeezed my eyes tighter.
Click.
Then he reached to buckle something on my back.
"Boo," the man breathed down my back.
I heard his footsteps fade away. And I inhaled sharply. Shivers went down my back and spread all over my body, and his voice rang in my head. Bouncing back and forth through the emptiness.
I heard voices and I strained to hear what they were saying.
"Were almost to the sight," I made out from one man.
Sight what sight.
"Star first," one man said.
Not only do these men have me they know me, yikes!
I felt one of them pick me up.
There was a tug on something on my shoulder. Then I was flying.
This is not normal humans don't fly
I open my eyes to see that I'm not flying I'm floating. That thing that they strapped to me was a harness connected to a parachute. I look back at the plane and see I'm not the only one awake. Harley is screaming loudly and Charlie has his eyes closed clutching his harness.
All girls except me look down in anticipation.
And I well I go limp.