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chapter 1 ~

Malayah in the mm
Friday July 15th 2016
Albany ga
8:30am
Malayah POV
Heyy.. people I'm Malayah
I'm 18 years old and I'm just lit lol. Anyways, I'm getting ready to get out of this hell hole I call home.  I'm from California but I'm moving to Albany to start college. this is my first time ever being away from home. Truth be told I'm a little nervous. I already met my roommate her name is JaKayla Anderson and her brother Jordan . They seem chill.. welp. That's all for me byee 💕
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10:30 am
"Layah!" JaKayla yelled
" what girl I'm right here. anit no need for you to be yelling" I say
" first of all ma check ya tone and second of all we need to go to the mall like a.s.a.p!"
"why?"
"cause my brother is having a party tonight and I don't want us to be looking ugly ma'am"
"oh my gawd bruhh why j.d keeping having all of this party's. having all of this random niggas and bitches in the house. I'm tired of this."
" looks like somebody's mad." Jordan says
" yes I am j.d. I'm tired of you having all of these random niggas and bitches in the house man."
"awe look at the married couple!" JaKayla says
"shut up Kayla!" me and j.d says at the same time.
" ugh lemme go and get dressed man.. "
I slowly walk up the stairs to me room . I open up my closet looking for something to wear.
"what to wear what to wear." I say to myself.
I look on both sides and seen a outfit that I haven't worn in a long while.
(outfit in the mm)
I kept it simple with my make up just some mascara and carmex was good for me.
I walked down the stair and yelled at Kayla
"kayla I'm ready to go FAM. why the hell you taking sooooo long?" I yelled
"because unlike you I'm tryna catch me a man yours is already here." she said
pause did she say my man was here I know damn well I anit got a man
"so you mean to tell me Jesus rose from the dead just to be with me again?" I said laughing
"girl stop playing you know who I'm talking about." Kayla yelled
" im going to your car and your driving hoe." I say
"don't I always trick?" she said laughing
I busted out laughing I walk to her car  and get in. I notice a all black car Larked across the street. I didn't pay it no mind I start the car and hook my phone up to the aux cord. I play kodack black. his shit be lit lol. then right when my part was boutacome on I get a text
~Text messagae~
Jordan💀💕: lay
laylay💕💍💦: wat Jordan
Jordan💀💕:I need to talk to you wen u n Kayla get back
laylay💕💍💦: for why do u need to talk to me sir?
Jordan💀💕: jus kno its important ma. be safe bae  n don't get in no trouble
layla💕💍💦:umm since wen have I been bae last I known I was single as a mf pringle 😂💀👌
Jordan💀💕:since today.
I left him on read I don't have time for any foolishness early in my day. ugh when I look up I finally see Kayla coming out of the house but Jordan was with her. oh my gawd why!!!
Kayla gets in the backset and Jordan gets in the front . I turned to Kayla
"Kayla I thought you and me were going to the mall." I say putting emphasis on the you.
"we are but your boyfriend wanted to come with us."
I looked around the car.
"Kayla I don't know who your talking about cus all I see is u n Jordan I don't see Jesus in the car." I say
with that being said I take my phone off the aux cord pull out my headphones and listen to "maybe I should call " by k Michelle
I let the words get to me then I feel Jordan staring at me so I look at him and turn up my music.
next thing I know I feel my headphones being taken out. now I pissed off.
"what the actual fuck jordan ! what is your purpose!" I yell at him
"man malayah you sitting up here being g childish as fuck acting like you font see me tryna talk to you man."  he yelled
" why the hell are you making assumptions about what I'm doing huh ? didn't know you cared so much" Isemi yell
"bruhh I'm really trying wit you but you sitting up here like your shit don't stink ma. but in reality it does."he says
I can't take it I start crying and get out the car. I walk down the street not knowing where I was going but I just went.
then that same black car that was parked across the street started following me. i didn't pay it any attention I just kept waking.
next thing I know is I hear four shots being fired and I look down and see blood.
the last thing I heard was "malayah please baby wake up"
then I passed out

how bout that lol

first chapter done

lots more to come just wait on it

how y'all feel bout Malayah so far... Jordan... what about JaKayla

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honestly I already love this book....

but stay turned guys dram
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oppss.... I spilt a lil tea hope y'all caught it tho..