is this wonderland or home

The black rabbit

"Why are you this way? You know theres so much better out there?" Mrs.Burdem asked. "Yeah. Hey I gotta go and catch up on some stuff." I said walking towards the door at the back of basically a cell. There was gray walls one light on the ceiling. When I walked out the room i noticed a couple kissing agianst a locker. I just walked to the front of the school. When I looked outside james and the boys where waiting on me. "Oh god how did they find out I had detention." I decided I would face my daily beating and walk home. When I walked out the world glowed so bright it hurt my eyes. Im pretty sure it would look better but theres these guys. Like all the trees are green people are in the park running playing. But then i have these guys in the picture." Hey loser. So glad you got a detention. I was worried we wernt gonna have any time to talk. " He said mocking the sound of a person who would really care. "Got any money for us." I heard from Butch who snuck behind me. He had spikey brown hair with a huge strip of bright yellow down the middle of it. He had brown eyes and he was well built. But an idiot without James. He's actually really nice. He was wearing they're gangs jacket with some camo pants." No I dont and if I did I wouldn't give it to you James." I said very smart ass like." Hey shut up." I heard from a voice to the left. This was Mack. He was so skinny you could see his spine from his stomach. But he had smarts so he's fast with a good idea of where it hurts to get hit no matter how much preasure." Guys I dont need your help." I heard from james. James was a girls dream. He had a "god like complection" And I get to hear all about it before school when a gang of girls beat the shit outta me."he has perfect cheek bons and has the perfect amount of muscle.","James has the eyes of the sky." And so on. Basically James has hair that like shoots up in the front and blue eyes that you cant help but notice up close. He also has "some junk in his trunk." And he never shows his face often he wheres like this hoodie that covers his whole body and it is so big you cant see his face as it is covered by shadows. Whatever but what nobody knows but me is he's gay and has a crush and beats me up cause im straight and shot him down in seconds. He just says hes bi. Wrong. Hes gayer then gay. Yeah I went to his house when we where younger and I found like a shrine dedicated to me with pictures and stuff. That was the last time I talked to him with a civil tongue. "Why dont you get lost James get over it im straight I dont hate gays or anything I just aint gay." This made him mad and I got my daily beating. "You should have said yes." He said as they threw me to the ground. I got up and dusted myself off. I began walking home and was about half way there when I see this black rabbit with a clock,tux, and has red eyes. "Oh my im going to be late. Im going to be late." He began to run towards the woods bect to me." Wait!" I shouted as i rushed after him. When I watched him dip down a huge hole I stopped immediately. "Woah. That would have been bad." I said beginning to talk to myself." Yes it would have Jason." I said replying back to myself. As I turned around about to finish my journey home I saw that black rabbit." You've seen to much." He said as he bounced up and kicked me backwards. I tried reaching for the sides. the top. anything to stop and go back up. But I couldnt as I fell it felt like an hour and I saw a bunch of old things like old memories, sounds, feelings. When I started feeling like this wasnt so bad i hit my butt. "Ow!" Is all I could say. When I looked I saw I was bigger then everything. "Where am I?" I said trying to turn my head." Well your in the outside." I heard a voice. "Where is that....." i said as i looked down." Hi" said a doorknob." WHAT THE FU..." "language please this is a peaceful place." He interupted my screaming of terror." Ok.......ok...ok" I reapeted as I caught my breath." Where am I?" I asked the doorknob." Your in the outside. You can get out if you find that potion and drink it." I began looking for it and found it right behind me. It was a black color with sparkles and stuff." Bottoms up I guess." I said kinda shakey. I began chugging it. It actually tasted fine.  "there nowyou should begin to....." I heard as the world became dark.

This is fun so tell if i should try to challenge myself and make it long or try to make it short and like 10 parts