A Different Cinderella Story

Chapter 1 We will miss you

Bare with me here this chapter I just made up some of the stuff

Carlos age 6, Carlos point of view.
I was playing in the my fathers garden,releasing my stress. My father has been very very sick. I was just praying and hoping that he will be okay. My mother has been also been very stress with work and my father. "Carlos, sweetie please c-come here, please." My mother said to me in tears. "Okay mommy!" I said skipping over to her. "Your fa-Doctor Drake came just left a few minutes ago, he said your father has only a few more weeks to live." I looked at my mom with disbelief. "I-I have to go see him, NOW!" I was was about to bolt into the house to see father but my mom stopped me. "You must let him rest sweet heart, he needs some." I nodded, about to brake into tears. I turned away from mother and ran into the woods where I went into my tree house. When I got inside of the tree house, I started sobbing lightly.

Mothers point of view
I was about to yell his name to stop him, but I decided to leave him be. Carlos is only 6 years old, he shouldn't have that idea in his head that his father is going to die soon. 'God why did I tell him! Why am I so stupid.' I thought to myself. I went back into the house then went into my little office to work on my papers. I was not crying at this point, it was just sniffles at this point.

Carlos' point of view. A few weeks later.
I was walking in the hallways of my house just thinking about random things, like how big is space, you know random stuff. Then I heard a high pitch scream coming from.......my fathers room. Mom. I sprinted to my fathers room only to fine my mother on her knees crying. My aunt was on the her knees to trying to comfort my mom. She was also crying. Doctor Drake was pulling a sheet over my father's head till he saw me. "C-Carlos... would you come out to the hall way with me?" I nodded my head yes then followed Doctor Drake to the hallway. "I'm sorry Carlos b-but your father...h-he passed away a few minutes ago. I'm so so sorry." I looked down at my feet then I bolted outside to my father's garden i fell to my knee's and broke down straight up crying my heart out.

..........We will miss you father.

Hey guys well I finally got the first chapter in. HELL YEAH! I honestly did not realize I made this chapter this depressing. What ever. Well I hope that you enjoyed it.