random hetalia rant part 1

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So I was reading some hetalia fanfiction lately (read: so much that my brain partially melted) and I noticed this little "problem" that has been bugging me for some time now. We all know that Italy, China and Russia (shhhhh my fav boy don't judge) have this little word that they say sometimes. I mean "Ve","Aru" and "Da". It's totally normal to put them in fanfiction, especially in the dialogue ir sth like that BUT
They are being overused, being put in every goshdang sentence. It doesn't even sound natural. Who the hell uses the same word in every sentence they say? I know I know I am a beginning writer and I shouldn't be making such rants because we are just people and we make such mistakes. But please don't use it
In every sentence
Everywhere
FRCKN ULTRA ALWAYS

 But please don't use it In every sentenceEverywhereFRCKN ULTRA ALWAYS

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Like, I knoooooow it is hard to understand .
"Da" means yes, doesn't it.
Why say "yes" at the end of every sentence. It sounds kinda retarded.
And these characters don't use these lil words so often.
Let's just use them from time to tine and it will be okay.
I won't be ranting about the german accents in fanfiction and Sweden's vovels thingy because that is acceptable (when not overused of course)
But what do I know about writing
I don't know anything
So yeah comrades that is all for today I guess
Cheeki breeki or whatever
Like, this was totally the worst rant you will see on the internet
But you still haven't seen my crappy motivational speeches that do the complete opposite :')

Here grab a crappy meme thingy

I NEED FRIENDSLOVE MEI also need an english teacher because I suck at english I DON'T ENGLISH GOOD

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I NEED FRIENDS
LOVE ME
I also need an english teacher because I suck at english I DON'T ENGLISH GOOD

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