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Dark Side - MrsStylesforever1994

Username: MrsStylesforever1994

Book title: Dark Side

Rating: PG13

Category: Fan fiction /Romance

Overall rating: 8

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Harry Styles is the bad boy; he got kicked out of his last 3 schools,has tattoos,and is a street fighter.When Peyton Dawson arrives as the new girl,his life changes.Peyton is cute,quiet and innocent. Harry wants to take advantage of that,as he knows Peyton has nothing to compete against,and he'd do anything to make her his...even if it just was for one night. Peyton knows of Harry's past,and is willing to help him change his ways,yet she knows Harry is one of the guys that would take advantage of innocent girl like her. Will Harry get his way? or will he allow Peyton to be the light in his dark world,and to help him find his gentle,caring side deep down inside

I just love this part of the sentence or will he allow Peyton to be the light in his dark world. That line is so perfect.

You might be wondering, why did you give me an 8? The story went a little fast. Don't get me wrong, I loved it. And what's the deal with the cuts? Was it because of Zayn? Was it because of something in her past? If it was about her past can you do a little flashback. Peyton can tell Harry about it. Oh yeah, by the way, I love the name Peyton! It's a beautiful name!

Back to the tips - or whatever you wanna call them - when you put a period [ . ] or a comma [ , ] leave a space. For example: I got a loaf of bread, eggs, and a carton of milk from the store. Sometimes you would leave a space between, which is good.

Okay well that's all I got to say. Hope you didn't get offended. And I can't wait for part 6!