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Pieces - Styles-Love

Username: Styles-Love

Book title: Pieces

Rating: PG-13

Category: Fan fiction / Romance

Overall rating: 10

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I awoke cold, and sore. My body ached from the recent and past scars. My eyes slowly opened, being blinded by a lamp dangling from the ceiling. I tried to adjust my body, but found my hands and legs were bound to the bed. I tugged the rope that was tied very tightly around the head board. I squirmed, trying to loosen the rope from my ankles. Panic started to rise within my body.

A sliver of light peeked through the door as it creaked open. I tried to look away from him. His face brought so many painful memories that I wish I could erase. His blonde hair stood up, gelled to look messy as if he didn't put any effort in to it. Niall always wore that smirk around me. His footsteps were slow, my anxiety built as he got closer to the bed.

Niall tilted his head once he stood over me, "Maria."

I squirmed as the back of his hand dragged down the side of my cheek. Niall was used to my silent treatment. He roughly gripped my chin and whipped my face to his.

"Where is he?" His soft sweet tone had vanished.

'Don't show fear. If they catch one of us they will say anything to get us to confess, they will lie. Just stay strong, we'll be fine. If they catch you, just always know I'm always going to be looking for you,' Harry's word play through my head as I stare in to Niall's eyes.

I never knew he was preparing me for this. I assumed Harry would always protect me. I felt so alone, so vulnerable.

"Something bad might happen to him if you don't tell me where he is," Niall loosened his clutch on my chin.

I gulped down my fears, not willing to say anything about the boy I fallen so hard for. Both Niall and I jumped when Liam burst through the door.

"Got him," Liam looked pleased with himself as he tried to catch his breath. My heart sunk as the words seeped in, just thinking about what they were going to do to Harry made me nauseous.

That biography makes me want to know what they're going to do to Harry!

Okay, I read the first chapter, Strangers, and loved it! It was the first chapter and there's already so much going on! I want to know what they're going to do to Maria! Please update!

Everything was 100%. There were no spelling mistakes, nothing. (: okay well that's seriously all I have got to say and can't wait for the next chapter!