For me this is the result of almost a year dwelling in the very own fabric of stories, narratives. One thing I should say about it first is that: (1) I can't force you to read this one, and (2) You're the one who decides whether this story is powerful enough or not.
The plot for this story is rather simple, a boy finds in his dreams the girl he meets up with in real life, and believing her coming from his dreams she is proof of his way back to the real world. From here, a sequence of events follows, but with a twist -- chapters are not sorted in the linear sequence but another: the breaking point comes within the first four chapters, from which the story recesses until things are set back to how they were before we knew about the story in the first place.
The new order (or "randomness", as it would better fit the term) proposes the progression of the hubris through rushing of the epitasis and watering out the catastrophe, leaving protasis as the ammendment trail that wraps things together.
I'm curious what you'll think of this, do let me know in the comments below ^__^
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Windows (the 10 Acts)
Romance"I couldn't really miss this train, and if I had I would have nothing to tell... I hope it goes well for you. But for me, it just can't." Windows is an essay on the basics of the narrative. You may read it two ways: first you may be tempted to read...