Book Reviews

Review 1- ooodles_

Well *taps side of bed, looks around, and sighs* This was a very interesting story that I have read so far.

The cover of the story is above or to the side.

Anyway this was a wonderful story I have to say none the less. So I do have criticism for the story.

Obviously I like the story so far and I do not think it is anything like The Bad Boy Stole My Bra. This has a very great plot to it. So there is definitely a problem with it that honestly only I would be able to find. *taps chin and stop and stares* For starters the setting of the classroom kind of makes it seem like they aren't even in school. I read Teen Fiction books to get the sense of school and life, but the only thing I get from this story is LIFE. It does have a great story behind it and in Samantha's background secret. I just don't get that omph you know. So this may come off as cruel, but the book isn't interesting me enough. The chapters are long I can give her that, but it needs a bit more spice. Also I can not stand that for most books like ooodles_ the main girl is Selena Gomez *groans*. I have nothing against her, but be original and don't use Selena for the story. (Don't change her because of this, but if you do decide to make another story like this in the future use someone other than Selena and be a different color in a world of yellow.) Sorry if that was to harsh.

Now for the good criticism.

Where do I even start. *squeals * Omg it is amazing from the characters crushes to the looks (except Selena, apologies for that.) of the characters in general. The way Samantha struggle with a haunting past. To the playful Trystan  (which is ironic cuase before I started your review one of the characters was named Trystan and was kind of the same) anyway it is just amazing. I absolutely love the story. I know how hard it can to update, but update regularly to keep the fans reading often. Dylan is a wonderful touch to the story. You should let Chase play hard to get with Gabby. I like Gabby I really do. She is like your average (not meant to insult anyone like Gabby) teenage girl. Jenny is one of my favorite characters as she can be sweet and helpful, but also fierce when she needs to be. I love her attitude. Samantha is hands down my favorite girl character. She is just like me. She know how to pack a punch and is so nice. She is running from a past that put readers on egde when you leave cliffhangers. It shows how she can easily go from hating a guy to liking him. She is amazing. For the guys I don't know a lot about them so I can't criticize them so I shall criticize Trystan instead. He is a popular boy (which again not to be rude, but be a little original and don't use the same thing everyone else uses. This is the popular boy and unpopular kids fall in love and blah blah blah. But please don't change the plot mow hunney it is great so far.) caring too. I love his character he is a bit carefree. He is super sweet too.

Anyway thanks for letting me review the book. Please don't take my criticism to hard. I had a wonderful time reading it and can't wait to continue. Signing out this is marjieamya. Goodnight.