Congratulations! I really liked your writing as the style that you wrote in was vague, yet, so intense. However, you still have room for improvement when it comes to grammar. Besides it was NaLu 😂💕 Thumbs up!
Your story was really nice. It shows how much of effort you've put into it and how invested you are in writing. There is still some way to go, but don't be discouraged. You have a lot of potential. Fighting!
It's a shame that your story was so short, because I absolutely loved it! Your grammar was pretty much on point and you followed the requirements. Keep up the good work! (Btw if you're an ARMY too, please let's be friends--//shot)
Now, this is what I call a masterpiece! Your story wasn't only the longest one, but it was well detailed with absolutely no grammar issues and a perfect vocabulary. You followed each requirement and even aimed for bonus points—! I'm so impressed lol. Sugoi~
As for those who didn't win, or couldn't participate; there's always a next time! Don't feel down and don't bash me because I'm the host and this competition depends on what my opinion is, okay?
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